Broken but Bold

I was destroyed by life's rough edges, ruthless stones,
Shattered pieces lost in silent tones.
But from the cracks, a fierce new flame was born—
A strength that rose through every ache and scorn.

Each fragment became a ground edge,
the story of struggles fought and led.
Steady, resilient and standing tall.
I rise untouched-- stronger after all.

The marks I wear are maps of where I’ve been--
proof of the strength growing from within.
From fractured , I found my spirit whole,
broken but bold, I rise and take my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/13/2025 11:50:00 AM
Excellent. Inner strength does indeed develop from personal struggles. Although your words touch on elements of sadness and struggle in life your poem is, in essence a very positive one. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 8/13/2025 7:56:00 AM
WOW! Form and meaning! Captivated I am by your rhyming poetry carrying an enthusiastic vibe between its layers.. It is with such a resilient state of mind and soul that we can meet our struggles and win many a fight! You have rendered your thoughts and sentiments in a so beautiful expressive poetry! So happy to read you, Rowena.. Stay always blessed and happy. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/13/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and heartfelt words! I’m truly touched by your encouragement.
Date: 8/13/2025 1:59:00 AM
You are a strong person. Glad because I understand your country has many storms.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/13/2025 3:52:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, we do face many storms, but each one teaches resilience. Your encouragement means a lot—it reminds me that strength grows even through challenges.
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