Rowena Velasco Poet Rhyme

Broken but Bold

I was destroyed by life's rough edges, ruthless stones,
Shattered pieces lost in silent tones.
But from the cracks, a fierce new flame was born—
A strength that rose through every ache and scorn.

Each fragment became a ground edge,
the story of struggles fought and led.
Steady, resilient and standing tall.
I rise untouched-- stronger after all.

The marks I wear are maps of where I’ve been--
proof of the strength growing from within.
From fractured , I found my spirit whole,
broken but bold, I rise and take my soul.



~ 3rd Place ~
Broken but bold enough to bounce back
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Contest Judged:  11/28/2025 1:01:00 AM

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Gary Radice August 13, 2025 at 11:50 AM Excellent. Inner strength does indeed develop from personal struggles. Although your words touch on elements of sadness and struggle in life your poem is, in essence a very positive one. Cheers - Gary

Besma Riabi Dziri August 13, 2025 at 7:56 AM WOW! Form and meaning! Captivated I am by your rhyming poetry carrying an enthusiastic vibe between its layers.. It is with such a resilient state of mind and soul that we can meet our struggles and win many a fight! You have rendered your thoughts and sentiments in a so beautiful expressive poetry! So happy to read you, Rowena.. Stay always blessed and happy. My deepest regards and blessings. Rowena Velasco August 13, 2025 at 7:59 AM Thank you so much for your kind and heartfelt words! I’m truly touched by your encouragement.

Victor Buhagiar August 13, 2025 at 1:59 AM You are a strong person. Glad because I understand your country has many storms. Rowena Velasco August 13, 2025 at 3:52 AM Thank you! Yes, we do face many storms, but each one teaches resilience. Your encouragement means a lot—it reminds me that strength grows even through challenges.