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                 Tania's Crystalline Contest ~ September 8, 2025

Black Velvet Skies


                       Brilliant is starlight to my eyes
                         Sparkling diamonds in black velvet skies
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Date: 9/15/2025 1:28:00 PM
a little gem of a poem Lin!! hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2025 11:29:00 AM
Lin, thanks for focusing some attention to the sky and little piece of the universe we can see at night. We are so small but so lucky indeed. Smiles!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/12/2025 8:36:00 AM
I truly miss seeing the myriads of stars, Duke. It's amazing how many we can see, knowing there are so many more that we cannot. Thank you.
Date: 9/9/2025 6:47:00 AM
Oh, if only to reach and touch, so easily, where eyes and hearts can deeply travel in a dreamy instant. A worthy quest. Beautiful write!
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/9/2025 7:35:00 AM
Hi, Joe and thank you for commenting such wistful words. They're very poetic.
Date: 9/8/2025 12:01:00 PM
Beautifully written Lin, shame light pollution is making it harder to see those diamonds. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/15/2025 9:03:00 PM
Count me in Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2025 1:30:00 PM
come and visit the IOM Tom, we have little light pollution here! The street lights go off at midnight now! hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/9/2025 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. When I lived in Colorado, I was amazed at the number of stars that were visible. Not here due to light pollution and I miss seeing their beauty.
Date: 9/8/2025 10:23:00 AM
Amazingly done!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/9/2025 7:33:00 AM
Thank you very much.
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