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Betsie Belle - Nursery Rhyme

Betsie tripped on spider silk
And kicked a can of milk 
But with aplomb this cow
Stood up and took a bow
And though her feet were wet
She did a perfect pirouette.

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Children Sing to Rhyme Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper

© 1st April 2023

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Jack Horne Date: 6/5/2023 5:51:00 AM LOL, a great one for the contest Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 6/11/2023 1:43:00 AM Thank you for the thumb's up my friend :) Incidentally, Eve has added this one to her Nursery Rhymes anthology. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/30/2023 4:31:00 AM Hey Paul, this write gave me a giggle, so cute - congratulations my friend on your win. Hugs, warm regards and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/30/2023 11:11:00 AM I'm pleased this gave you a giggle, Jenny...aim achieved :) Thank you for reading and commenting (and for the congrats). Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/23/2023 11:03:00 PM A fun one, Paul, belated congratulations:) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/26/2023 5:53:00 AM Thank you for the visit and congrats, Joanna. Have a lovely day! // paul

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/23/2023 8:24:00 PM Too funny! Thanks for the laugh! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/26/2023 5:45:00 AM Thank you Kim; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2023 8:06:00 AM So glad this placed. it was one of my favorites in the contest Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/23/2023 10:04:00 AM Thank you, Andrea. I enjoy writing these nursery rhymes...and as I write I smile, laugh and grin :) Regards // paul

Bill Baker Date: 4/17/2023 5:05:00 PM Very cute, especially for kids, Paul. Good luck in the contest! Bill Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2023 11:35:00 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Bill ~ thank you and best regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/9/2023 6:37:00 AM Cute, cute cute Paul, all the best in Eve's contest. the last two lines brought a smile to my face as i think of our 4 month old grand-daughter giggling her heart out by the time she is three years old. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2023 11:56:00 AM Thank you for your pleasant visit, Jenny. That young granddaughter of yours will keep you young and busy...I know mine did!! ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2023 2:33:00 AM - Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Paul :) - hugs Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2023 11:22:00 AM Thank you once again for another lovely visit, Anne-Lise :) These Nursery rhymes are most enjoyable to write and read! Hugs // paul

Len Gasun Date: 4/7/2023 9:30:00 PM I love this a lot. This is so cute and sweet nursery rhyme poem/song for children my dear poet friend. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2023 11:14:00 AM Thank you for the lovely feedback and Easter wishes, Len. I've been away for several days, and now am doing my best to get back in the groove :) Blessings // paul

Eve Roper Date: 4/7/2023 5:11:00 PM Paul , congratulations on your win on your poem, “Betsie Belle". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2023 11:12:00 AM Thank you for including my poem in the winners' list, Eve. I hope you had a lovely Easter. I spent mine in Rome; it was hectic but enjoyable. Blessings & Hugs // paul

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/7/2023 11:40:00 AM Congratulations on your win. This is so very cute. Love It. Have a blessed day................ Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2023 11:09:00 AM Thank you, Paula. I'm still trying to catch up with a load of notifications. Regards & Blessings // paul

Valsa George Date: 4/3/2023 5:14:00 AM Very cute and sweet ! Love the cow's pirouette ! All the Best dear Paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/3/2023 7:24:00 AM Thank you dear Valsa. My grandfather had cows on his farm, but none of them were interested in ballet :) ~ Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/2/2023 4:14:00 PM this is ADORABLE> short and sweet makes it all the better Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/3/2023 7:16:00 AM Glad you liked it, Andrea :) Best regards // paul

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/2/2023 4:12:00 AM Ahhh!! Cute one for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/2/2023 11:19:00 AM Pleased that you enjoyed it, Sara. Thank you for reading and commenting. Best regards // paul

Daniel Turner Date: 4/1/2023 6:44:00 AM This is great Paul. a perfect nursery rhyme. A pleasure to read my friend. Well done! Have a wonderful weekend. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/1/2023 11:07:00 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Danny. I've read your nursery rhyme offering and it was immensely enjoyed. Best regards, my friend. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2023 6:05:00 AM - Easy to learn for kids... and very sweet, Paul - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend and Easter :) - hugs Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/1/2023 11:06:00 AM Thank you on all counts, Anne-Lise. May you too have a lovely Easter :) Regards & Hugs // paul