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Barbie and Ken

In a world of opinions and plastic,
answers to questions become bendable ..
Stretching every which way, when elastic
We have Barbie and Ken, that are able

In a world of, all for me, some for you
Stretching in all ways, being elastic ..
Barbie says this, Ken has a point of view
which causes division, so much static

In a world of fairness, wrong verses right 
Stretching in ways that is so dramatic,
views being unmatched, the pulling is tight ..
tension exists, in a world of plastic

Barbie and Ken tangle each point of view
In a world of, all for me, some for you


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Still trying to understand

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Jennifer Fenn Date: 3/3/2021 4:57:00 PM Just a little scribble huh? This has some deep important truths. This world is full of “all for me, some for you”. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/4/2021 7:46:00 PM Jennifer, you and your thoughts are appreciated. I am still confused at why so many act this way. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Walter Rego Date: 10/17/2020 1:30:00 PM Reminds me of situations where I seem to be pulled in one direction or another. Good poetry evokes feelings in the reader as well as the author. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/17/2020 7:58:00 PM Yes !! This is happening more and more. Being pulled in all directions. Stay Strong, or you will Break. Thank you Walter. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/11/2020 6:21:00 AM People are becoming more selfish, the I has become so important in relationships - perhaps the women because they have been kept down for too long, and perhaps the men because they have been conditioned to think that women should listen, that we we are not individuals and unique. - lets agree that we are a couple, and share, you and me together, we will decide. Maybe Barbie and Ken will take notice from their plastic world and hear us. Hug, kisses Jennifer - a powerful poem Brandy. Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/11/2020 5:17:00 PM Selfish is the right word. It is sad what is happening around us. This poem reflects just that. Thank you Jennifer, for your insightful comment. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 9/28/2020 5:07:00 AM Yeppers this is spot on.... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/28/2020 4:28:00 PM Truth in every word. Thank you Robert. ~ Brandy

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/22/2020 4:56:00 PM A good point made here in its an all about me world, and who cares about thee? Well done, Brandy! Panagiota xx Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/22/2020 5:31:00 PM Thank you Panagiota. I am noticing this more and more. Very sad indeed. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/17/2020 6:18:00 AM A wonder to read and so thought provoking. This reads incredibly good. I didn't love Barbie and Ken but do love your words. God Bless you always Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/17/2020 1:30:00 PM Thank you Regina. This holds many emotions indeed. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/15/2020 9:13:00 PM So much to think about here. Love the 'staccato rhythm' of this sonnet as well. Superb penning, Brandy. Thank you, Gershon Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/16/2020 6:53:00 PM Yes, there is much to think about. To ponder. Thank you Gershon, for your wonderful comment and compliment. So kind of you to say. I appreciate you. :) Brandy

Daniel Turner Date: 9/15/2020 8:11:00 PM This is a big world, except for most of us it's actually quite small. You have to be flexible to a point or you will snap. Just because someone has a different POV, there is no reason to get all bent out of shape. There are more important things in life, than what a stranger may think.. Deep write, Brandy:) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/15/2020 8:39:00 PM You are right Daniel. We are just a speck in this great big world. Bending is an exercise. We all move in different ways. Such an insightful comment. Thank you. I appreciate your reading this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Joseph May Date: 9/14/2020 6:34:00 PM In a plastic world, reality is stretched to suit a point of view, Nicely penned Brandy.. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/14/2020 7:51:00 PM I completely agree. I know that even in a plastic world- truth will always win. Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Watt Date: 9/12/2020 11:04:00 PM Give me someone with flesh and bones and a real soul, not a plastic icon of idealism. The 'all for me, some for you' mentality is what prevents real dialogue and relationship from happening. Better to be 'all for us'. Love your sonnet, Brandy. Thought provoking. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/13/2020 6:13:00 PM Exactly. Always be "real" That's not a difficult request. I completely agree with this "all for us" Yes, this is the way it should be. Thank you John for your wonderful comment, for your support. I appreciate you and your friendship. Your kind words. Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/12/2020 1:50:00 AM Oh I simply loved this banter between Barbie and Ken. More than a scribble. ~~ Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/12/2020 10:33:00 AM Thank you Victor. Hmm, I suppose it can be viewed in this way. Welcome back my dear friend. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2020 6:12:00 AM I am trying to decipher the message behind your poem my friend. Yet, it describes give and take of the world you live in. May there be peace always, everywhere. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/11/2020 5:43:00 PM It describes the give and take around the entire world. Also in our free time, when moments circle words. There is peace in my heart, around me. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your support. Your kind words. :) Brandy

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/11/2020 5:16:00 AM Well written Brandy, with a clear message to think about, it seems to have become a selfish world with no one willing to compromise. Tom Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/11/2020 12:09:00 PM Yes, you are right Tom. "I Wanna Talk about Me" as the song states. By Toby Keith. It is so sad what has happened to the World and those in it. I am praying for change. Thank you for reading this little scribble of mine and leaving your thoughts upon it. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 9/11/2020 2:37:00 AM I will ponder these words today, Brandy. Sometimes it seems the world today is “all for me, none for you.” No one seems to be willing to compromise, to find a middle ground. I don’t think we will ever know peace and harmony; that seems to be the current state of human nature. Nicely written my dear friend. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/11/2020 11:45:00 AM Such an insightful comment. Thank you John. I ponder these thoughts as well. The sad truth is- we are experiencing this in our reality, but also in our World of Words. In Poetry. What happened to compromise and understanding ? You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy