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AWAKENING

AWAKENING
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dawn's fresh wakening
the wind's gentle kiss on skin
new beginnings born
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025
12th grademorninghaiku

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Danny Derden
Date: 9/16/2025 10:58:00 AM
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Your haiku is delicate and full of promise—each line breathes renewal. The imagery is soft yet vivid, and the final phrase lands with quiet optimism. You’ve captured the essence of morning with elegant simplicity. A lovely awakening indeed.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:31:00 PM
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thank you, Danny. Grateful for your visit and your kind, insightful words. Appreciate your sensitivity.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/14/2025 5:50:00 AM
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very sweet ~ lovely
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:31:00 PM
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thank you
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/13/2025 11:24:00 PM
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Peacefull poem Sara.' Good to refresh My harried mind.'
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:32:00 PM
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I'm grateful my poem was refreshing.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2025 8:56:00 PM
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A moving poem-picture combo, Sara. Love it. Thanks, Gershon
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:32:00 PM
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thank you, kind sir. Your support is always appreciated and welcomed
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/13/2025 11:38:00 AM
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What a creative/fun Haiku write and very cute picture you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away.........
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:33:00 PM
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many thanks, sweet Paula...have a blessed evening hugs, Sara
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Sotto Poet
Date: 9/13/2025 10:59:00 AM
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We all have the chance to start over every single day. Aptly expressed with lovely metaphors
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:33:00 PM
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wise words, dear Sotto....what a gift each day is...thanks for visiting today, hugs from Texas Sara
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Paige Hind
Date: 9/13/2025 9:50:00 AM
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A sweet image- would like to feel that wind on my skin :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:34:00 PM
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thank you for your sweet comment...hugs Sara
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/13/2025 9:05:00 AM
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Every day is a golden opportunity for rebirth. Very nicely said.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2025 6:34:00 PM
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so true, Joe....have a blessed evening Sara
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