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AWAKENING

AWAKENING
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dawn's fresh wakening
the wind's gentle kiss on skin
new beginnings born

Copyright © sara Etgen-Baker | Year Posted 2025

12th grademorninghaiku

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September 16, 2025 at 10:58 AM

Your haiku is delicate and full of promise—each line breathes renewal. The imagery is soft yet vivid, and the final phrase lands with quiet optimism. You’ve captured the essence of morning with elegant simplicity. A lovely awakening indeed.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:31 PM

thank you, Danny. Grateful for your visit and your kind, insightful words. Appreciate your sensitivity.

September 14, 2025 at 5:50 AM

very sweet ~ lovely

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:31 PM

thank you

September 13, 2025 at 11:24 PM

Peacefull poem Sara.' Good to refresh My harried mind.'

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:32 PM

I'm grateful my poem was refreshing.

September 13, 2025 at 8:56 PM

A moving poem-picture combo, Sara. Love it. Thanks, Gershon

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:32 PM

thank you, kind sir. Your support is always appreciated and welcomed

Paula Goldsmith

September 13, 2025 at 11:38 AM

What a creative/fun Haiku write and very cute picture you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away.........

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:33 PM

many thanks, sweet Paula...have a blessed evening hugs, Sara

September 13, 2025 at 10:59 AM

We all have the chance to start over every single day. Aptly expressed with lovely metaphors

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:33 PM

wise words, dear Sotto....what a gift each day is...thanks for visiting today, hugs from Texas Sara

September 13, 2025 at 9:50 AM

A sweet image- would like to feel that wind on my skin :)

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:34 PM

thank you for your sweet comment...hugs Sara

Joseph P. DiMino

September 13, 2025 at 9:05 AM

Every day is a golden opportunity for rebirth. Very nicely said.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2025 at 6:34 PM

so true, Joe....have a blessed evening Sara

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