All That Constitutes a Receptive Mind

Grey dawn was retreating from my
  Front gate.
I looked upon its obvious distress;
And, slinking away as the new day 
  Breaks...
Its all too apparent old weariness.
What strange compunction pulls on 
  Us to pause
At the sudden insistence of a whim?
This, which, seemingly, without any 
  Cause,
Rising upwards from very deep within;
Would I have tarried but too long a 
  While
I feared I might undo the fragile spell...
But in that brief moment was 
   Reconciled --
With childlike innocence where 
   Wonder dwells!
And God forbid that time should 
  Undermine...
All that constitutes a receptive 
  Mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 8/28/2025 8:33:00 AM
Bang! This is such an emotionally sad read and the flow of your tongue has no interruptions to how the best times are in our youth. Amazing!!!
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John Fleming
Date: 8/29/2025 9:58:00 AM
Thanks, Ryan. Until you commented...I had forgotten all about this poem. Many thanks for the reminder - cheers! :) john
Date: 4/11/2020 10:46:00 AM
A very powerful and pensive verse my friend...hope you are keeping safe...best wishes & Happy Easter...from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 8/29/2025 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Winged Warrior. i hope you are in good spirits. :) john
Date: 3/30/2020 2:00:00 AM
Your writing has had a pensive feeling to it lately John. I hope this Covid-19 is not too much of a burden my friend. I long to shop again and miss it so that I actually enjoyed shopping for food we needed. It felt good to get out of the house. xxoo
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Date: 8/29/2025 9:59:00 AM
You are indeed a very dear person, Connie. I hope you are safe and sound. :) john
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