All Hallows Evening

There was not in the sky one small patch painted blue
when the sun wrapped in clouds set unnoticed unseen. 
Eerie sounds; what they were, he did not have a clue
but in darkness it’s known that the spectres convene. 

Rolls of thunder ensued in the pursuit of light
then the droplets of rain soon increased, landed hard.
Swishy beating of wings betrayed shaitans in flight…
He stopped dead in his tracks as they caught him off guard.

Then a split in the clouds let the moonlight appear,
to the hamlet he strode, ghouls he tried to avoid.
With a spring in his step, shedding aura of fear,
niggly doubts were dispelled. He got back his sangfroid.

Midnight struck and at last every curtain he drew.
An inversion of roles: Jekyll sipped on his brew. 

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An English Sonnet in anapestic tetrameter
 rhyme scheme (abab-cdcd-efef-gg) 

All Hallows’ Evening Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Craig Cornish

© 8 November 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 11/13/2022 12:56:00 PM
Dear Paul, your dark imagery sets the stage perfectly for a scary All Hallows’ Eve. I especially loved “the sun wrapped in clouds set unnoticed unseen” - that serves to stir the fear of things moving in secretive and mysterious ways under the cover of darkness. A perfect mood for your clever sonnet and the twist of your couplet is a stroke of genius! Best wishes for a win in the contest and warmest wishes and hugs for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/18/2022 5:40:00 AM
Thank you dear Susan. I am always pleased to read what you have to say, for you don't just read a poem, but also take notice of its different aspects. I am glad you enjoyed it. ~ Warm regards & Hugs, (and happy weekend) my friend // paul
Date: 11/10/2022 3:26:00 PM
Very clever, Paul: You would totally expect Mr Hyde to be out on a night like this. Love the twist in the last couplet. Halloween was fun for us. We drove to a nearby valley to an Italian Tattoria and d feasted on veal. So yummy. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/11/2022 8:07:00 AM
Yes, Suzanne; now it's the turn of Mr Hyde to go frighten a few people! Glad you enjoyed. I'd have also enjoyed a veal meal, especially at an Italian restaurant:) Hugs // paul
Date: 11/10/2022 6:03:00 AM
Dear Paul, What a spooky poem you have created with mysterious images! The ending is classic! To my faves, although it gave me a chill! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 11/11/2022 7:54:00 AM
Sorry for the chill, Mala, but probably that is a good sign :) Thank you for liking, and for the fav. Happy weekend // paul
Date: 11/9/2022 4:08:00 AM
You made me shiver with this one, so well done Paul, sangfroid love that word. Winning wishes, hope your keeping well :)
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Date: 11/11/2022 5:27:00 AM
Thank you on all counts, Vienna. I should have fixed a note warning to bring warm clothing, just in case...:) ~ Best regards /x/ paul
Date: 11/9/2022 4:07:00 AM
A great sonnet picturing the Halloween dread and mystery ! The ending was unanticipated ! Indeed a great entry for the contest ! All the Best dear Paul !
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Date: 11/11/2022 5:15:00 AM
Your insightful comments are truly appreciated, Valsa...thank you. Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul
Date: 11/9/2022 3:38:00 AM
I like the surprise ending. Split personality to the extreme. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/11/2022 5:06:00 AM
Thank you for each and every one of your comments, Sara. May you have an enjoyable weekend. Regards // paul
Date: 11/9/2022 1:47:00 AM
You captured Halloween brilliantly.
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Date: 11/9/2022 1:50:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. I wish you a nice day, my friend // paul
Date: 11/8/2022 10:55:00 AM
wonderful, paul! you've created a very spooky mood and i especially love the ending...
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Date: 11/8/2022 11:09:00 AM
I am pleased that you enjoyed the spooky mood, Ilene. I'm not sure if many will catch on to the ending! Best regards // paul
Date: 11/8/2022 5:29:00 AM
Enjoyed the tone and flow, Paul. Expertly delivered as always.
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Date: 11/8/2022 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay; your comments are appreciated. Regards // paul
Date: 11/8/2022 1:06:00 AM
- An eerie evening, Paul - I think he was glad to get home - A wonderful sonnet :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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Date: 11/8/2022 1:14:00 AM
Thank you for being my first commenting visitor, Anne-Lise, and for enjoying my humble text. Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul
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