For Nette Onclaud's "What Happened After" Poetry contest/ July 19, 2025
She spent so much of her time in her mind wildly churning fantasy with deep yearning which she spun like useless twine, then grew old, never learning that her dreams, like clouds, had dimmed joy with which life might have brimmed.
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