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For Vanya Evangeline's Myth & Memory Poetry Contest

Regarding Aengus Óg: The Irish God of Love
Link: https://brehonacademy.org/aengus-og-the-irish-god-of-love/
Aengus Falls in Love is found toward the bottom of this listed source.

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Aenghus and Caer

A hundred-fifty swans in dancing light
of sun were shimmering upon the lake
when Aenghus, God of Love, beheld the sight
and called to her who made his poor heart ache,
"You haunt my dreams. I die for love of you!"
With her reply, the cloak that he had on
turned into soft white wings, for love was true.
And thus it was he joined her as a swan.
How great their joy when Aenghus met his mate,
the fair Caer, there in the gleaming throng.
Imagine knowing bliss to be your fate!
In unison, they sang a wondrous song
so sweet it lulled all listening to sleep,
a melody their hearts would ever keep.

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 9/17/2025 6:04:00 AM

This is a mythical swan-song lullaby or ballet - so beautiful. J :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/14/2025 8:07:00 AM

I had a quick look..It was love at first peep.' No hinderance from the beaks.? You see i managed to make the Imagining literal leap.'

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/9/2025 10:12:00 AM

so beautiful and inspiring poetry, enjoyed the imagery, merci poétesse

Jay Narain

Date: 9/8/2025 10:29:00 AM

Nice love poem.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/8/2025 3:20:00 AM

I've stared for a bit, probably with my mouth open. That happens sometimes after I read a poem. It has after reading many of yours. Where to start - meter is top tier, story line entertains w/ content, imagery & word styling. I was impressed by the depth of your knowledge on the subject. AND the pic - the God of Love appears most lust worthy. Pls lie and tell me this was a challenge that took a long time to complete. The contest has not sparked me, so I'll cheer for yours. LOVE CayCay