A Place I Have Never Been

A place I Have Never Been

This place I travel to
Still I have never been.
I like the casual feel of your words.
I relish the smell of these streets.
Words extracted from your experiences.
I hungrily accept your invitation.
I come along with you to town,
to Saigon.

Although I have not traveled on these streets, 
you somehow have made them 
feel familiar.

I choose a red bicycle,
the one I wish I had when I was a child.
As we ride you salute the spirits.
I think “What a strange boy!”
You turn and smile and I think
“Maybe I am wrong?”
The incense of Lang Ong Shrine clings to me.
My linen shirt retains the scent.
Perhaps with a whiff I can come back here again?

You bike quickly
in a slow kind of way.
I feel pebbles beneath my tires.
I like the fortune tellers in the market, but I do not stop.
I’m afraid of what they might have to say. Did they for-tell that we would meet here on white pages?

I fear I will  get lost 
in the Ba Chieu Market.
If I speak who will understand me?
Am I willing to barter 
for a strange bargain?
If I could, 
I too would scale the walls,
Evade the police. 
But I have no worry,
for I travel on 
your waves of thought.
“Sandals Sunglasses and Hats!” your strings vibrate.
Me I catch your tunes.
Thoughts rise like balloons. 
Red balloons, the colour of my bicycle, the bicycle I never had.

Yes I come along with you, to town.
Onto the dirt trails of Dong Ong Co.
I wish to meet your Dharma uncle at his Temple.
Am I being bold? 
May we share a cup of tea?
In being here can my heart be healed?
Can I grasp bits of my lost self in a conversation that has not happened? Will Buddha offer me understanding?

I step gently 
for I know I am your guest.
My breath incapable 
of moving air in this place.
My footprints don’t disturb the dust.
Yet I have somehow arrived here.
Who does the Altar belong to?
Not to this white ghost 
from a far off land.
Still I am thankful
Thankful for the invitation 
to visit a strangely familiar land.

Inspired by Hai Phan’s beautiful poem”Come Along With Me”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 8/7/2022 10:13:00 AM
What a beautiful adventure, what untold experiences of yesteryear you did experience, the exhilaration, the joy of this journey can only be for the love of a close one, and/or for the love you feel for the country, you feel at home, yet not speaking the language you are thankful you have been invited to a strange land, yet, so familiar. Richard I hope you are well, glad to see you back. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:05:00 PM
I enjoyed traveling alongside you Richard Lamoureux. I could smell the pho' Ga' when cycling through the Ho Chi Ming City. I doffed my sun hat anticipating every moment, where will your thoughts lead me. I enjoyed your journey! ~Anaya
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2022 4:38:00 PM
This comment brought a smile. I’m pleased you enjoyed the ride.
Date: 7/29/2022 8:00:00 PM
Positively great and wondrous poem you have here…poetically brilliant!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2022 10:26:00 AM
I Love this response. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/27/2022 7:50:00 PM
Your narrative piece on Saigon flows easily, comfortably like a river. I enjoyed the sight-see through your evocative words of a city deep in cultural richness. Be well. Brian
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2022 10:26:00 AM
Your words bring a smile. Thanks so much.
Date: 7/26/2022 3:40:00 AM
fascinating write adored reading this blessings.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thanks. Blessings Richard.
Date: 7/18/2022 8:15:00 PM
Richard how are you my friend? Missed you here. This is such an intriguing write and to know you were inspired by Hai Phan's poem, makes it so more wonderful. Glad to see you posting and hope to see more of you... Blessings your way my friend...
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Michael Tor
Date: 7/29/2022 2:53:00 AM
Oh ok Richard. My wife Judy is but I will have to check this out. Thanks for letting me know and great to hear from you...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2022 10:52:00 AM
So nice to have you visit. These days I’m spending more time on Facebook. If you are on Facebook please join my group “The Inspired Poetry Project”. Blessings Richard.
Date: 7/10/2022 2:50:00 PM
Lovely tribute poem, Richard: I read the poem you referred to and can see why it inspired you. Thanks for leaving some comments. I have missed you. Best, SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2022 9:40:00 AM
I’ve been more involved with my site on Facebook. Thanks so much for reading this piece. ;0)
Date: 7/10/2022 2:21:00 AM
Brilliant. I just love this. Your words are a true gift from the gifted. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2022 5:45:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading.God’s blessings to you as well Regina.
Date: 6/30/2022 2:37:00 PM
"perhaps with a whiff"...more like; your cerebrum'z engram spilling on slip what you smelled, sharing with those uv us who appreciate the cognitive in write...Have a great day dear poet...much love, james
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2022 3:12:00 PM
Hi James, thanks for introducing me to Hai Phan.
Date: 6/30/2022 12:00:00 PM
Hello Richard, Lamoureux, I love your adventure. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2022 11:00:00 AM
Hello Richard, this poem Living In Reverse is is wow! How did he do that? Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2022 10:53:00 AM
Hello Robert, I will search for his poem.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2022 12:25:00 PM
Hi Darlene, so nice to see you, please read Hai Phan’s poem that inspired me to write this one.
Date: 6/29/2022 7:31:00 PM
Intriguing adventure, Richard. Glad to see you posting again. Take good care, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/29/2022 9:44:00 PM
You as well Gershon. Thanks for visiting.
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