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Poetry/Verse/a page from my life story
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1746-562-19
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, July 19, 2025/AI Free
For the International Contest, Bite Size, No.118
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 07/27/2025

"BEAUTIFUL"

13 Beauty ideas | nature wallpaper, nature hd, scenery

The story of my journey has many pages. I open to a one that is yellowed, old, crumbling. Oh, that park at the end of our street, where I would sit on a bench with father. We were still, lost in the hues of green, and blue of the river flowing by.

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Date: 7/22/2025 9:41:00 PM
A lingering memory of a sweet time with your father. Touching and equally beautiful.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/23/2025 12:21:00 PM
Valsa, thank you for the comment and compliment, appreciate
Date: 7/21/2025 3:34:00 PM
Hello Constance, I enjoyed reading this poem. Friendsip & Love, /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2025 2:34:00 PM
Hello Constance, you are welcome. Friendship and love, /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 7/23/2025 12:21:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the comment
Date: 7/20/2025 8:14:00 AM
I wonder what it would be like to have had a father. Reading your poem, I now know
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Constance La France
Date: 7/23/2025 12:23:00 PM
Frederic, thank you for that beautiful comment, yes I was very lucky to have such a wonderful father, when many do not ~

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