A Masterpiece Written in DreamsPremiere Contest Winner

My fingers are already aching,
their muscles weary, spent, and tired.
Sweat soaks through my singlet,
my eyes grow heavy, begging for sleep,
to pay back seventy-two hours denied.

Yet each of my writes lies in his bin,
the sponsor never seems to tire
of casting them there with careless joy.
Perhaps that brings him most delight—
a cross my restless heart must bear.

Would it not be better to run the race
on a track, not behind a screen?
I could have run forty-two miles
in less than two hours, breaking the world record,
instead of these seventy-two with no glory.

There’s even a method to this madness:
twenty-seven contests in a row,
each confined to less than forty-three lines,
echoing marathons run on the track.
But my ink has dried, my paper stays blank.

I restrain my heartache deep within,
lest it spill across my face,
where anger and discouragement dwell,
hidden beneath facial creams and wry smiles,
till after work removed their weary veils.

Each night, each burdened weekday,
and each night, each joyless weekend,
I do my laundry, I eat my meals,
over the silence of this same paper,
still waiting for its first word.

So tonight, I beg you, Sleep:
take away this sleeplessness.
For poems are better written in dreams.
Leave me there till I craft a masterpiece—
one no sponsor can ever deny its glory.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/13/2025 2:12:00 PM
Congrats Maclawrence, the best poems are those from the heart. I loved this piece for its sincerity. Keep rolling on!
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 9/13/2025 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Massey.
Date: 9/13/2025 9:55:00 AM
Dear Maclawrence, it seems that "Sleep" has granted your wish! Indeed, this poem is ingenious, yes a "masterpiece written in dreams", and no, "no sponsor can ever deny its glory." Your angst and a heartfelt plea so poetically and exquisitely expressed! Congratulations for your grand trophy win in Mark's contest! So well-deserved! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 9/13/2025 12:17:00 PM
You are right sleep wrote me a masterpiece. Thanks Susan for your kind words.
Date: 9/12/2025 7:31:00 AM
This is a masterpiece, truly. truly. Reading it was sharing your intense emotional experience. Well written!!!!!!. The last verse says greatness. A Fav for me. Thank you much. Blessings of favor Congratulations Janis
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 9/12/2025 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Janis for the comment and for making it your Fav.
Date: 9/12/2025 12:48:00 AM
Aah, Chief ! You have done it with this one for all of us. Wave your endurance high to crack the codes of northern based contests. If this offering didn’t achieve a first placing, I would’ve given up. Salute, congrats & hug, dear Sir.x.
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Date: 9/12/2025 6:31:00 AM
Ghairo, I appreciate your encouraging comments always. Thanks.
Date: 9/11/2025 10:37:00 PM
Maclawrence, this is a brilliant meta-poem about my poetry marathon, as it describes the exhausting process of writing a poem that one hopes will do well in the contest, and then either being rejected or placing in the top ten. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your first place win on Mile 15 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. We’re well past the halfway point! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 15 blog post.
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Date: 9/11/2025 10:44:00 PM
Thanks Mark. Something innate nudged me to think that this poem will come out top. Thank God you felt the nudge too. Many thanks for the placement.
Date: 9/11/2025 10:25:00 PM
THIS IS FANTASTIC, SO GLAD YOU WON SO I COULD READ IT. THIS SHOULD BE THE THEME SONG FOR THE MARATHON. GREAT, GREAT WRITE, PERFECT FEEL AND SENTIMENT. Congratulations! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 9/11/2025 10:45:00 PM
CayCay thanks as always.
Date: 9/7/2025 8:06:00 PM
the sponsor never seems to tire of casting them there with careless joy…We always hope for good sponsors that are fair. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 9/8/2025 1:03:00 AM
Surely Kim, only that for winning sake the hands ache without a brake to a near break while many great poems are even wrongfully discarded assumed to be fake.
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