Premiere Contest WinnerA Masterpiece Written in Dreams

My fingers ache—
muscles weary, spent, and sore.
Sweat soaks through my singlet.
Eyes grow heavy, begging for sleep,
to repay seventy-two hours denied.

Yet each piece I write ends in his bin.
The sponsor never seems to tire
of casting them away with mean regards—
a cross my restless heart must bear.

Would it not be better to run the race
on a track, 
not behind a screen?
I could have run twenty-seven miles
in under two hours—breaking the record—
instead of these seventy-two with no glory.

There’s a method, even, in this my madness:
twenty-seven contests in a row,
each confined to forty-two lines,
echoing kilometers run on marathon tracks.
Yet my ink has dried, my paper stays blank.

I restrain my heartache deep within,
lest it spill its ache across my face,
where anger and disillusionment dwell,
hidden beneath facial creams and wry smiles,
till after work removes their weary veils.

Each day, each burdened weekday,
and each weekend, each joyless weekend,
I do my laundry, eat my meals,
beside the stubborn silence of this paper—
still waiting for its first word.

So tonight, I beg you, Sleep:
take away this sleeplessness.
For poems are better written in dreams.
Leave me there till I craft a masterpiece—
one no sponsor could ever deny of glory.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Congrats on your fine finish in Mark's Marathon ~ have a lovely day
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 8:41 PM
Thanks Line.
Watts Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 1:07 AM
Hi Maclawrence Well done you did make it and a deserved Congratulations for your final submission I could see your angst in your desire to write a worthy poem and could see your sleepless being Cheers Chris I share an honorable mention with you in this marathon
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:22 AM
Thanks. Congrats to us.
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:18 AM
I agree with Ghairo's comment here. I see your progress here as well. Big congrats for your numbered placement in the contest.
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:25 AM
You are right, imagine a medical doctor poke nosing into the poetry world not up to two years now. But it's only where there's no will that there's no way.
Daniels Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 8:29 PM
Maclawrence ! Congrats on your HM in 2025 Marathon. I’ve enjoyed the raw strength & tenacity that shone through the poems of yours I’ve read. They resonate with Africa’s strength, common sense sensitivity & stability against odds & having to contest with more experienced poets. This particular masterpiece has descended from dreams into 3D reality. I’m happy 2 have some connection with your work in realm of poetics & 2 have witnessed your progress over last couple of months. Hugs, Dear Poet.
Toney Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 2:58 PM
Maclawrence, congratulations on earning an Honorable Mention in the 2025 Poetry Marathon’s FINAL Placement Contest, and for winning the Best 2025 Poetry Marathon Meta-Poem Award! The poems of the 37 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post. Time to take off those running shoes and give those feet a rest!
Ashley Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Dear Maclawrence, it seems that "Sleep" has granted your wish! Indeed, this poem is ingenious, yes a "masterpiece written in dreams", and no, "no sponsor can ever deny its glory." Your angst and a heartfelt plea so poetically and exquisitely expressed! Congratulations for your grand trophy win in Mark's contest! So well-deserved! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 12:17 PM
You are right sleep wrote me a masterpiece. Thanks Susan for your kind words.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 7:31 AM
This is a masterpiece, truly. truly. Reading it was sharing your intense emotional experience. Well written!!!!!!. The last verse says greatness. A Fav for me. Thank you much. Blessings of favor Congratulations Janis
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Thanks Janis for the comment and for making it your Fav.
Daniels Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 12:48 AM
Aah, Chief ! You have done it with this one for all of us. Wave your endurance high to crack the codes of northern based contests. If this offering didn’t achieve a first placing, I would’ve given up. Salute, congrats & hug, dear Sir.x.
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 6:31 AM
Ghairo, I appreciate your encouraging comments always. Thanks.
Toney Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Maclawrence, this is a brilliant meta-poem about my poetry marathon, as it describes the exhausting process of writing a poem that one hopes will do well in the contest, and then either being rejected or placing in the top ten. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your first place win on Mile 15 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. We’re well past the halfway point! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 15 blog post.
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 10:44 PM
Thanks Mark. Something innate nudged me to think that this poem will come out top. Thank God you felt the nudge too. Many thanks for the placement.
Godwin Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 10:25 PM
THIS IS FANTASTIC, SO GLAD YOU WON SO I COULD READ IT. THIS SHOULD BE THE THEME SONG FOR THE MARATHON. GREAT, GREAT WRITE, PERFECT FEEL AND SENTIMENT. Congratulations! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 10:45 PM
CayCay thanks as always.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 8:06 PM
the sponsor never seems to tire of casting them there with careless joy…We always hope for good sponsors that are fair. Hugs ~ Kim
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:03 AM
Surely Kim, only that for winning sake the hands ache without a brake to a near break while many great poems are even wrongfully discarded assumed to be fake.
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