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A Love So Rare

You never exspect the unexspected
   I thought this might go some where
   I hate that feeling of being rejected
   Thinking she liked me by her stare

   Now feels like l'm again subjected
   To whats become the here nor there
   A past time that is though still collected
    When l think of every moment we'd share

   It seems a long time since we'd seperated
   Though no body else could ever compare
   Something l could never have anticipated
    This love that just seemed to be so rare


     An exstesion follow up to poem what love brings open ended ect  about past relationship that was brief taken from original poem brief encoute
r 2003 extra verse never felt like this so elavated
That feeling of walking on air
At one time perhaps seemed perpetuated
But thought that we were the perfect pair

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Joanna Daniel Date: 5/5/2021 11:36:00 PM Nice one, David, some relationships are just not meant to be, however precious they seem to us:) Login to Reply David Scott Date: 5/9/2021 9:31:00 PM Thank you two lines wete taken from brief encounter poem just word play l did feel perhaps a little repetitive l have a few in this pattern as had one pubilshed on this style