A Love So Rare
You never exspect the unexspected
I thought this might go some where
I hate that feeling of being rejected
Thinking she liked me by her stare
Now feels like l'm again subjected
To whats become the here nor there
A past time that is though still collected
When l think of every moment we'd share
It seems a long time since we'd seperated
Though no body else could ever compare
Something l could never have anticipated
This love that just seemed to be so rare
An exstesion follow up to poem what love brings open ended ect about past relationship that was brief taken from original poem brief encoute
r 2003 extra verse never felt like this so elavated
That feeling of walking on air
At one time perhaps seemed perpetuated
But thought that we were the perfect pair
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2021
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