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ROAD TRIP

Let us take a road trip,
now off with bags and zip.
Snow covers the wide road,
no grass here to be mowed.
Cow riding the tractor,
is it a huge actor?

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 5/31/2025 8:14:00 PM

Hey, you never know! This poem made me smile and smile. My husband used to be a farmer with a tractor and he will get a kick out of this poem. Your 2 lines are my favorite. ;) I can 'see' the poem as I read it, Wonderful.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2025 1:29:00 AM

Quite a funny poem. Let summer come.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2025 2:40:00 PM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun "ROAD TRIP" to be, Quite a funny poem. It was fun to bring to life. Hope this write made you laugh. Guess summer will be here soon. Not wanting the hot heat. Can we go from spring to fall??? As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/9/2025 9:20:00 PM

Lol, so fun Paula! I picture some of those crazy tourist places back in the day of long road trips in the USA along the highways and byways, like on Route 66 :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2025 2:37:00 PM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "ROAD TRIP" write. It was so much fun to bring this cow riding a tractor to life. Hope I gave you a laugh. Never know what one will see along the highways. As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/9/2025 12:21:00 PM

Just plain fun, Paula! Love the cow riding tractor! Sending you blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2025 2:34:00 PM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun "ROAD TRIP" to be, Just plain fun. It was fun to bring to life. Hope this write made you laugh. All cows ride tractors, right??? Hahaha!!! As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2025 5:01:00 PM

Fun ending. Reminds how our world today feels like Twilight Zone

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2025 2:30:00 PM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "ROAD TRIP" write. It feelings like we are living in the Twilight Zone. What a great old TV show. I loved it. Hope this write made you laugh. As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/7/2025 11:18:00 AM

LOL! Zinger of a cow!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2025 11:42:00 AM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over and for your LOL. Glad you enjoyed my fun "ROAD TRIP" write. It was so much fun to bring this cow zinger ending. Hope it make you laugh. As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/7/2025 3:47:00 AM

Bags packed, ready to go. Lol. This was sure a fun fun Paula thank you. Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2025 9:30:00 AM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "ROAD TRIP" write. It was so much fun to bring to life but took extra time and thought. As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Silent One

Date: 5/6/2025 1:12:00 PM

Nothing better than a road trip, but Im not sure I would want to drive in the snow... Nice poem dear poet..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2025 9:29:00 AM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun "ROAD TRIP" to be a, Nice poem. I love road trips but not in the snow. The word snow worked in this write, so I used it. This one was fun to bring to life. Hope you are OK. As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/5/2025 2:27:00 PM

burrrr, Paula i'll wait until summer! you opened up a cenario within 6 lines, I want to do this too. gl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2025 1:05:00 PM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping and for your GL. Glad you enjoyed my fun "ROAD TRIP" write. It was fun to bring to life but took extra time and thought. Should be easy for you to do. As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2025 1:09:00 PM

- I prefer grass to snow... the cow should be inside in the winter, Paula :))) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/5/2025 1:30:00 PM

Great to see you here. Hooray!!! Thanks for stopping and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "ROAD TRIP" write. Yes, cows should be inside in the winter and I also prefer grass to snow. This crazy cow got loose and was riding the tractor. "Or" was it an actor??? Hahaha!!! Hugs... As writers we need a "Road Trip" from time to time so let's take off.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/5/2025 12:35:00 PM

ROAD TRIP (RHYME) ~ Date Written:5/5/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet. ~ INTO THE HEXALINE GROOVE Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored By: Nette Onclaud