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cherries

cherries are for me
fresh picked or in a warm pie ~
red heaven awaits

fruitloveredsweettreehaiku

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/14/2025 5:52:00 PM

I love the happy images evoked by these lines! Congratulations on your win, Paula. Best wishes. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/15/2025 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you love the happy images evoked by these lines in my fun "cherries" write. Cherries were fun to write about. I also love to eat them but none yet this year. Cost toooooo high. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2025 8:44:00 AM

"1 Place" cherries ~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.....

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/14/2025 8:22:00 AM

Yesss!!! Love your last line! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2025 1:16:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you love my fun "cherries" write last line. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/14/2025 5:32:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet haiku. Love the last line.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2025 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Congratulations with a first place win. This made my day very happy. Thanks for your fun contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "cherries" write. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/14/2025 4:06:00 AM

Congrats on the win Paula. Pies sound good

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2025 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "cherries" write. Warm cherry pie with ice cream is heavenly. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2025 12:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win :) - Have a lovely weekend, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2025 1:09:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad to see you back reading my fun "cherries" again. Always great to see you here. A Great Weekend To You. Hugs... Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2025 12:30:00 AM

Back with congrats for this one too

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2025 12:36:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you came back to read my fun "cherries" again. Always great to see you back. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/26/2025 8:13:00 PM

Good haiku, Paula~~especially the last line. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:51:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Glad you found my "cherries" to be a, Good haiku. It was fun to write. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 11:06:00 PM

Yum. Love cherry pie too

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "cherries" write. Warm cherry pie with ice cream is the best. Wish I had some. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/25/2025 9:04:00 PM

'red heaven' -- I like that phrase, Paula. Now to clean the mess of my face. lol.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:48:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "cherries" write and enjoyed my phrase, "red heaven." Now to clean a face. Have you tried lots of soap and water on the face??? Hahaha!!! Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/25/2025 10:53:00 AM

Ohhhhhh, I wanna taste! These fruit haikus make my mouth water and yours is right up there, what a cherry craving I have while, at least, my haiku craving has been fulfilled ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 11:11:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "cherries" write. I also want a taste. The price is still toooo high. Waiting to be cheaper. Maybe next week. I love them fresh or in a warm pie. Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Ink Empress

Date: 5/25/2025 8:17:00 AM

Love the last line the most; i remember once i had some cherries that were so delicious, i can imagine pies with cherries as i read this! Pleasure visiting your poem today! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 9:22:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "cherries" write. Oh yes, I love them fresh or in a warm pie. Warm cherry pie with ice cream is to die for. Extra Heavenly!!! Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/25/2025 5:55:00 AM

Good one. For pies the tart ones work best. Good luck in contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 7:55:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Good luck in contest. Glad you found my "cherries" to be a, Good one. I love them fresh or in a warm pie. Heavenly!!! Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2025 2:29:00 AM

- Cherries ... so good ... not often we can buy it ... only in summer time ... great haiku, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 7:52:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your support. Also thanks for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "cherries" to be a, great haiku. I love them fresh or in a warm pie. Hooray!!! Right now they cost too much. The price will come down in a couple of weeks. Hugs... Have a great day eating "cherries" as you go writing away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/24/2025 9:50:00 PM

cherries ~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.....