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Lyrics By Lin Lane

Seems like yesterday I watched your fingers
play the piano, and heard your music unfold.
In memories, the romantic vision of us lingers,
though love's symphony dulled like tarnished gold.

When we were together, you wrote for me,
songs you scored day and night to compose
of the passion between an oak and willow tree,
Lyrics sweet as the fragrant scent of a rose.

Chorus:
But your love wilted like a flower
whose leaves lie withered on the keys.
My heart is wounded and I've no power
to make the miserable ache inside of it ease.

Tender notes on sheet music, ripped and torn.
No longer sung for they bring pain and grief,
stabbing me like a rose's sharpest thorn.
From loss of yesterday's passion there's no relief.

Can time erase the memories I fear won't fade?
Traces of us and what use to be linger in me.
I sway as if slayed by a dagger, and I'm afraid
that from the ghost of you, I'll never be free.

Chorus:
Your love wilted like a flower
whose leaves lie withered on the keys.
My heart is wounded and I've no power
to make the miserable ache inside of it ease.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/27/2025 4:52:00 PM
Lin / Jerry - Breathtaking and Beautiful. CayCay
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Date: 8/24/2025 3:39:00 PM
This is very good Lin and Jerry. Great lyrics and a wonderful melody. I really enjoyed it:)
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Date: 8/24/2025 2:43:00 PM
Wow! This is just so beautiful! Heartache and grief brings a treasure trove of poetry and music. We do not wish for it, but perhaps in God’s grace our hearts exposed for all to see and likewise feel when life’s season of heartache visits. Beautiful music and voice.
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Date: 8/24/2025 2:23:00 PM
Jerry ~ I don't know what to say after listening to what you did to my verses. Tears... many tears and thanks for turning this into a song. It holds special memories for me... you've no idea how special this is to me. My heart holds this as a treasure.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2025 2:39:00 PM
Thank you ever so much for your kindness, Jerry. I will definitely download it and keep it forever!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/24/2025 2:33:00 PM
I knew it was special and took great care in working the music around the word, so as not to change a single one. I'm glad you like it, if you download into your devise you can have forever. God Bless
Date: 8/24/2025 1:42:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Jerry, you have set Lin's melancholy poem to music so amazingly - another epic! hugs Jan xx
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