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2nd Place winner of My Song Contest

Lyrics By Lin Lane

Seems like yesterday I watched your fingers
play the piano, and heard your music unfold.
In memories, the romantic vision of us lingers,
though love's symphony dulled like tarnished gold.

When we were together, you wrote for me,
songs you scored day and night to compose
of the passion between an oak and willow tree,
Lyrics sweet as the fragrant scent of a rose.

Chorus:
But your love wilted like a flower
whose leaves lie withered on the keys.
My heart is wounded and I've no power
to make the miserable ache inside of it ease.

Tender notes on sheet music, ripped and torn.
No longer sung for they bring pain and grief,
stabbing me like a rose's sharpest thorn.
From loss of yesterday's passion there's no relief.

Can time erase the memories I fear won't fade?
Traces of us and what use to be linger in me.
I sway as if slayed by a dagger, and I'm afraid
that from the ghost of you, I'll never be free.

Chorus:
Your love wilted like a flower
whose leaves lie withered on the keys.
My heart is wounded and I've no power
to make the miserable ache inside of it ease.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Gibbons Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 11:36 AM
Wow this is so beautiful lyrics touched my heart so did music so glad Lin told me about it Two very talanted creative duo hugs <3
Godwin Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 4:52 PM
Lin / Jerry - Breathtaking and Beautiful. CayCay
Turner Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 3:39 PM
This is very good Lin and Jerry. Great lyrics and a wonderful melody. I really enjoyed it:)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:43 PM
Wow! This is just so beautiful! Heartache and grief brings a treasure trove of poetry and music. We do not wish for it, but perhaps in God’s grace our hearts exposed for all to see and likewise feel when life’s season of heartache visits. Beautiful music and voice.
Lane Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:23 PM
Jerry ~ I don't know what to say after listening to what you did to my verses. Tears... many tears and thanks for turning this into a song. It holds special memories for me... you've no idea how special this is to me. My heart holds this as a treasure.
Lane Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Thank you ever so much for your kindness, Jerry. I will definitely download it and keep it forever!
Curtis Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 2:33 PM
I knew it was special and took great care in working the music around the word, so as not to change a single one. I'm glad you like it, if you download into your devise you can have forever. God Bless
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Absolutely beautiful Jerry, you have set Lin's melancholy poem to music so amazingly - another epic! hugs Jan xx
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