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30.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 355 - volcano eruption -

                                
                                      red-hot intense heat
                                  flowing lava starts sizzling -
                                          fiery void of hell
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Date: 5/2/2025 10:35:00 AM
Anne-Lise, it sure could be hell for anything that gets too close. It's a stark reminder of what exists deep within our planet. Hard to believe it's there. As you highlight, we live in a marvelous and varied world with a lot going on underneath. Smiles!
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Date: 5/1/2025 5:07:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, your haiku blazes with raw, elemental force where each word crackling with heat and wonderful imagery. I felt the molten power beneath the surface, that sense of nature’s fury and the edge of the unknown. I loved how yuou captured the haunting beauty and danger of fire, leaving me both awed and introspective. It certainly ignited my imagination. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/1/2025 2:46:00 AM
A perfect description of the eruption .A nice haiku !
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Date: 4/30/2025 7:10:00 PM
Your haiku is quite incredible, Anne-Lise. Words like "flowing lava starts sizzling" immediately spring to mind. Also, the image is so suitable.
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Date: 4/30/2025 3:54:00 PM
This is an impressive haiku, Anne-Lise! The word choices are so evocative of an erupting volcano! The picture is well suited, too.
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Date: 4/30/2025 2:11:00 PM
That sure describes it
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Date: 4/30/2025 10:41:00 AM
Nice picture and true volcano eruption poem. Nice work.
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Date: 4/30/2025 8:47:00 AM
a perfect description of a volcano erupting, anne-lise (not that i've ever seen that in person!)...
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Date: 4/30/2025 8:18:00 AM
“Fiery void of hell” powerful line there Sunshine! Wellsaid…Debx
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Date: 4/30/2025 7:21:00 AM
hell it is, wonderful haiku, thanks poet anne lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2025 7:29:00 AM
- Yann, thank you very much for reading :) - hugs
Date: 4/30/2025 7:03:00 AM
Yep! Whether here or down below~ hell is hell. Well said.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2025 7:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs
Date: 4/30/2025 6:56:00 AM
Watched it in Iceland, it must be terryfying to be in its path. Hope your weather has improved Anne Lise. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2025 7:04:00 AM
- The weather is brilliant today, Tom ... a beautiful spring day in the sunshine :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
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