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24.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 354 - waterway - 

                                           river lush and rich
                                    driftwood delays its journey -
                                       the mountain snow melts
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/29/2025 3:27:00 AM
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Beautiful painting in real-time and a very nice description in a haiku. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/28/2025 10:18:00 AM
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Great picture and wonderful write my friend. love phyl
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2025 1:26:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a wonderful spring day.........
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 4/27/2025 7:56:00 AM
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Anne-Lise, a beautiful scene indeed. The I can practically hear the sound of the water rushing down the slope. I bet it's cold!!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/26/2025 4:45:00 PM
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I love this haiku. It's amazing how you wove driftwood into a position of power in this haiku.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 4/26/2025 3:03:00 PM
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Hey Anne-Lise! What a vivid and very descriptive poem! I really like the image you shared.
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Michael Tor
Date: 4/25/2025 7:34:00 PM
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Such a scenic haiku loved your words...
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Jay Narain
Date: 4/25/2025 10:32:00 AM
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Nice picture and a perfect haiku for it.
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/25/2025 10:30:00 AM
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What a rich piece with perfect imagery! Love the picture you've provided.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 4/25/2025 12:54:00 AM
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Perfect imagery. I've seen this picture before but my muse is at low ebb. Wonderful haiku, dear Anne.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/24/2025 7:04:00 PM
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I enjoyed your beautiful poem, and also the beautiful picture, Anne-Lise. Have a great weekend. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/24/2025 6:24:00 PM
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beautiful and sensitive, remind me something in "Yellowstone", a day off enjoyed yann
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David Crandall
Date: 4/24/2025 9:19:00 AM
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Ah, put me on the bank of that mountain stream! I remember sending little stick boats down streams like that and imagining their journeys. :-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2025 10:07:00 AM
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- Happy childhood memories, David ... I did the same :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/24/2025 8:11:00 AM
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Lovely Anne-Lise, brought back memories of the melting snow in the fjords. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2025 10:09:00 AM
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- Nice that you still dream about the Norwegian fjords... they have left their mark, Tom :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
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