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02.09.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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1409 SENRYU

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Brian Strand
4th place in the contest

- All I Need -

     the dormant splendor
     all I need is beauty s l e e p -
     tired of counting s h e e p
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Date: 9/6/2025 7:50:00 PM
Oh this one is in winner list. Big congrats
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Date: 9/6/2025 7:14:00 PM
Was not able to. Comment to your latest post. I do not like the new system
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Date: 9/6/2025 7:13:00 PM
So cute. Congratulations
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Date: 9/6/2025 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your selection with this work. Extremely clever use of appropriate language underpinning your theme with clarity. Wonderful Howard
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Date: 9/5/2025 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with a memorable write, illustrated by a lovely picture. Wishing you a peaceful weekend.
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Date: 9/5/2025 2:04:00 PM
I hope you can do the leap.' Over Those sheep Anne-lise.'
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Date: 9/5/2025 4:44:00 AM
Yea, who can sleep with all that bah bah baaing? Not very interesting, all the same, and most not worth staying awake for.
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Date: 9/5/2025 1:36:00 AM
Great senryu. As always, your images are so telling. Congratulations dear Anne, on your great win. Have a lovely weekend. Love and hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2025 1:54:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs
Date: 9/4/2025 11:20:00 AM
wonderful poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 9/4/2025 4:43:00 AM
Amazing writing. So love this. God bless you friend. love, Gina
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs
Date: 9/4/2025 3:24:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, what a fine Senryu. I know times are difficult to sleep. Best not to eat or drink after 5.30pm. Best for a win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 9/3/2025 1:24:00 PM
A hope for rest, some nights don't cooperate. The picture of sheep is cute. Good luck with the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:09:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Hilda :) - hugs
Date: 9/3/2025 2:35:00 AM
Exceptional senryu, Anne-Lise, encapsulating complex metaphors. Warm regards, good luck in the contest,
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:09:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
Date: 9/2/2025 5:42:00 PM
This is precious, I love it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/4/2025 12:09:00 PM
- Thank you very much, CayCay :) - hugs
Date: 9/2/2025 4:30:00 PM
outstanding, Anne-Lise. best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:08:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 9/2/2025 2:10:00 PM
I find as you get older, having a good night's sleep is difficult sometimes. Not even the sheep help lol. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:08:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 9/2/2025 1:19:00 PM
Terrific! Hugs – Kim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2025 12:08:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs
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