Crimson Rose Inn


A year ago, Daniel and Jenna had been inseparable. A perfect couple—or so it seemed. But love had its secrets, and Daniel had plenty.

He had proposed to her on Valentine's Day at the Crimson Rose Inn, the very place she now feared. But that night, something changed. Jenna remembered the way he had acted—distant, nervous, his fingers drumming against the velvet box in his pocket.

"You trust me, don't you?" he had asked.

She had nodded. But later that night, she found the letters.

Hidden in his suitcase were torn, crumpled pages—love letters from someone else. Someone desperate. Someone angry.

"You belong to me, Daniel. You always have. You always will."

The signature was smeared, the ink bled like tears, but the intent was clear.

When Jenna confronted him, he swore it meant nothing. Just a mistake. A moment of weakness.

But then Daniel disappeared.

Vanished without a trace, his car left in the inn’s driveway, the tires streaked with mud leading into the woods. They searched for weeks, but no body was ever found.

Jenna told herself she had moved on. That he was just… gone.

But now, a year later, the same Crimson Rose Inn, the same date, and a letter written in the same familiar hand had brought her back.

Was Daniel alive?

Jenna’s hands trembled as she unfolded the letter left at her hotel door. The handwriting was unmistakable—Daniel’s.

"Meet me where the roses never wilt. Midnight."

Her breath hitched. The Crimson Rose Inn’s garden.

A sick feeling coiled in her gut, but she went. She had to know.

The garden was overgrown, the trellises sagging under tangled vines. Moonlight barely pierced the clouds, casting jagged shadows on the cobblestone path. Jenna’s heartbeat pounded in her ears as she stepped forward.

Then, she saw him.

Daniel stood beneath the dead rose arch, unchanged from the night he vanished—same dark suit, same nervous stance.

"Daniel…?" Her voice was barely a whisper.

He smiled. But his eyes... hollow. Hungry.

“You came back.” His voice was low, edged with something unnatural.

“Where have you been? What happened to you?”

“You don’t remember?” he asked, stepping closer. “You should. You were there.”

She shook her head. No. No, she wasn’t.

But then flashes of that night came back, like lightning splitting the darkness.

The argument. The rain pounding against the window. Daniel’s voice, begging.

Jenna’s hands—clutching something cold. Heavy.

A fire poker.

And then… blood.

So much blood.

Her knees buckled. "No... I—I didn't—"

"You did," Daniel whispered, reaching for her. His touch was ice. "And I’ve been waiting for you to remember."

Jenna turned to run, but hands—**not his, more than his—**gripped her wrists. Shadows slithered from the vines, taking shape, forming figures. Others.

Others she had forgotten.

The inn, this place—it wasn't just haunted. It was hungry.

Daniel leaned in, lips brushing her ear. "Now, love... it's your turn to stay."

The garden swallowed her scream.

And by morning, the Crimson Rose Inn had a new legend—one more vanished lover among the wilted roses.

Comments

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this short story. Encourage a writer by being the first to comment.

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter