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Mutely, tearfully Swallowed up, submerged in grief Remembering calls You may leave us a message— At the sound of the tone please… Caryl Ramsdale Copyright © 2011 All rights reserved. Tanka Poetry Form September 10, 2011 ~* Please pray for those left behind on that fateful day, September 11, 2001. *~ My "heartfelt condolences" to the brave families of 911. “Remembering 9/11” poetry contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire ~1st Place~ 9/14/2011

Copyright © Caryl Ramsdale | Year Posted 2011


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  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:02:00 AM

    WoW! I cnn feel the total rejection in this. A good write. God Bless, JB
  1. Date: 9/18/2011 11:08:00 AM

    What a deserving first place, just an amazing write, sadly beautiful.. and thanks for your ever comments and support of my poetry~~
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 9:48:00 AM

    You've said it all in just a few lines - others have taken hundreds of pages....
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 8:25:00 AM

    congratulations to you on the personal way you brought this one home to the heart, Caryl.
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 6:07:00 AM

    It's a gem with a message,Caryl.You are Aversatile writer.LUV.FABIYAS M V
  1. Date: 9/16/2011 1:59:00 PM

    This really is a beauty, Caryl
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:26:00 PM

    CAryl, Congratulations on your well deserved win!
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 5:39:00 PM

    Paralyzed in fear and speechless...oh yes, this is awesome, Caryl. I also love the 4th line that makes it ultrapersonal. Congrats to u, Gwendolen
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 5:26:00 PM

    A touching write that deserves to be on top... always Michael
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 3:49:00 PM

    Very moving piece. Many congratulations to you, Caryl : )
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 12:47:00 PM

    so much grief. I like how you made something so routine as answering the phone, mean so much. congratulations on your win :)
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:58:00 AM

    Nicely said. Congratulations on your 1st place win Caryl
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:11:00 AM

    Very expressive work..Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 12:06:00 AM

    Oh, this brings goosebumps. Well done, congratulations on this poem. You honour them well. Lee
  1. Date: 9/15/2011 12:03:00 AM

    so well expressed; no wonder it's tops, caryl..sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:31:00 PM

    Those last messages, those voices beyond graves...very emotional. Congratulations on your top win. Best, iolanda
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Caryl! Kim
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:11:00 PM

    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carolyn, Caryl
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 6:24:00 PM

    Fine master piece,Caryl.Congratulations on your well deserved win...may God continue to guide and protect those left behind....
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 4:56:00 PM

    The sound of those messages.....chilling and profoundly unforgettable. This poem is so stirring with emotion...excellent!
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 3:39:00 PM

    Congrats Caryl on a fantastic first place win luv..
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 2:46:00 PM

    hey Caryl congrats on your win..David
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 2:46:00 PM

    yes SO fast..loved one could not grasp the happening or the dead their deaths..Congrad's light & love
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 2:41:00 PM

    Yes, those unanswered phone calls...for so long. congratulations on a wonderful entry and win. Love, Joyce
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 2:39:00 PM

    Captures the scene perfectly Caryl. Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 2:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win Caryl. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:32:00 PM

    Caryl, I got chills when I read your entry. I had visions of family members trying to call the victims and getting a recording. You rose right to the top with this first place win! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
  1. Date: 9/13/2011 8:37:00 PM

    this is a creative way to approach the topic, CARyl. A powerful last line. LUv, Andrea (and good luck in the contest)
  1. Date: 9/12/2011 6:28:00 PM

    very sad to remember....some gave all!
  1. Date: 9/11/2011 9:29:00 PM

    Sad reminders in such a unique message.
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