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a tale of 2 lovers

A tale of 2 lovers....
Who always stood by each other.
they stood by each other through thick and thin...
To tell the world that their love will always win.
All day long and all day night...
All they did was just fight...
Fight not with each other....
But fight against the world together.
there were a lot of ups and downs...
their were lots of weeps and frowns.
Many came in between their love...
But couldn't break their true love.
Difficulties after all they had...
Doesn't seem like anything is gonna be bad.
Love and respect stays always in their heart....
Even though they are miles apart.

Copyright © rimu patil | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 2/21/2016 4:10:00 PM

    rimu patil, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 12/27/2015 3:48:00 PM

    RIMU, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE