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All of Us Are Equal

They said we were equal
That is what they made us believe 
However they acted different 
Responded with greed

He laid out the rules
For all of us to read
Pretending to us 
That he will do good deeds

He pretends to be kind
Loving and care
A natural leader 
That many could bare

We chose him to lead us
Guide us the right path
And so he did
Until one day at last

We observed the rules
That he had laid out
They had been improvised
Twisted and in doubt

He had changed them 
Without our consent
Forgotten their meaning
He left a large dent

They were disloyal to us all
Except him and his helpers 
They were based on greed 
Not the people and others

He is so selfish
Inconsiderate, a fool
We realized then 
We can’t stand to his rule

He stepped over us
Didn’t care for our food
He took control 
And acted very rude

He always spoiled himself 
Being a jerk
He threatened with the military
To keep us at work

We tried to rebel
But his armies too great
Working without food
Our lives were at stake

I had a good friend 
Who had injured himself
We told him the story
He set my friend on the shelf

My friend couldn’t work
He said he would get help
But help never came 
And my friend died in pain 

that’s the last straw
We had to escape 
So we snuck out at night
And put  on our capes

He remained alone
With no one to rule
He had been forgotten 
Because his rules were to cruel

He had an empty heart
That’s what set him apart
For it was spoiled and rotten
And that is why he was forgotten

We waited and waited
In the cold wet rain
We had only realized 
What more could we gain

We were finally free
To work for ourselves
Not worry about him
What more could we need

And so my friends 
I hope you understand
That achievements can be accomplished 
By work not demand

I have not told you
Who he might be
He is man 
Very selfish and greedy

Copyright © Jimmy Dawood | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/7/2016 3:28:00 AM

JIMMY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
Date: 7/21/2012 2:21:00 AM

Lovely poem Jimmy - reflective! Best line 'achievements can be accomplished by work not demand'. Nice! Welcome to the Soup!
Date: 7/18/2012 5:09:00 AM

A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jimmy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

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