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Suffocated By Thick Breeze

Grasping the forest so tightly
A thick mantle of layered breeze
Whips into rows and rows along aisles -
Coating the trees, suffocated
From a blanket of dry frothing .
The clouds pass by, unconcerned
As jays and ladybugs are silenced
While creatures of the meadow grow restless
And blossoms sigh listlessly -
Waiting for dewy October's rainfall.

Early October Premier Contest
3 Oct 2017

Copyright © zelene desha | Year Posted 2017


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  1. Date: 10/3/2017 10:59:00 PM

    Congratulations, Zelene on your win.
  1. Date: 10/3/2017 7:29:00 PM

    Helene congratulations on your win
  1. Date: 10/3/2017 5:31:00 AM

    This is a powerful emotive write, great use of words.. I know how you feel..