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Love's Fine Line

Like a rainbow bright and beautiful
Love flourished as a river flows to stream,
Forever faded fast to lies and loathe
Lowered the gauntlet on pure love of youth.

Magic dreams disintegrated into ash
Smouldering fire quenched as passion died,
The rainbow was eclipsed by selfish whims
This Romeo and Juliette expired.

Slowly through the years pendulum swayed
Inching closer to sever love in bloom,
Wilted romance now tasted only pain
The substitute to gather pieces lost.

In the beginning love carried a song
Sweet precious souls enwined in happiness,
Time is the culprit changing lovers tune
Embarking in passage of loneliness.

Love contains the key, the core to Life
Reaching several highs and many lows,
The gauntlet ever present to invade
Unless the lovers firmly stand, together grow.

For Mr. Heck's Contest

Copyright © Satin Doll Diva | Year Posted 2010


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  1. Date: 5/13/2016 10:45:00 PM

    Satin, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
  1. Date: 5/12/2016 9:56:00 AM

    Satin, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
  1. Date: 7/1/2010 7:16:00 PM

    Hi my friend.. sorry to hear u will not be returning .. hope u will check out your comments inbox to view the many nice comments u have received... I understand caring for your son comes first and foremost.. u have my phone numbers so call me .. I will be back from Hawaii by 2nd week in July .. found out today... have internet on my new cell phone so IM me.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. Ron sends luv too.. u and Stevie both..
  1. Date: 6/21/2010 6:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on yourwin in John Heck's contest "The Gauntlet" Satin. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 6/12/2010 9:45:00 AM

    I new this was going to win ;) I so enjoyed it! Light & Love
  1. Date: 6/8/2010 9:04:00 PM

    hey, havent' seen you in a while, a BIG congratulations to you for your fine win! LUv, Andrea
  1. Date: 6/8/2010 6:07:00 PM

    congrats on the win!! This is a great poem
  1. Date: 6/7/2010 4:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 1st place win in John's contest Satin. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 6/7/2010 1:51:00 AM

    Wow! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Excellent poetry. Lovingly, Dane Ann
  1. Date: 6/6/2010 9:52:00 PM

    A super-congratulations on your 1st place win with this amazing poem! Awesome, well done. Chris.
  1. Date: 6/6/2010 8:25:00 AM

    What a wonderful, yet sad story of love that blooms, but withers with the passing of time...wow!!!! This is a terrific poem, and well deserving a win in John's contest!! Well done! Love, Carrie
  1. Date: 6/6/2010 7:08:00 AM

    A lovely metered poem. Congratulations on your top honors. Love, Joyce
  1. Date: 6/6/2010 7:02:00 AM

    Congrats Satin Doll Diva on your 1st p0lace win in John's contest with this fantastic poem.. hope all will be well soon with Stevie and u will be able to return to our Family... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
  1. Date: 6/6/2010 6:41:00 AM

    Super congrats on winning first place with this eloquent & moving poem, Satin Doll--I can definitely see why it took top prize :)! --nikko:)
  1. Date: 6/6/2010 5:44:00 AM

    Satin, many congratulations on your wonderful poem winning John's fine contest, go girl >> James
  1. Date: 5/25/2010 3:36:00 PM

    Welcome to the Soup Family ...luv.. "Sweetheart"
  1. Date: 5/25/2010 4:44:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Satin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 5/23/2010 5:37:00 PM

    This is nice and enchanting. I love it. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Keep writing. Great job! Joseph
  1. Date: 5/23/2010 10:04:00 AM

    Great premise here, and you tie some of the earlier forlorn images into a more uplifting ending. I am still a newb here at the soup, but I won a membership yesterday as a winning prize....so I can't enter this contest, and I love free verse! What a great idea for John Heck to hold a non-premium contest. Kudus to him, and to you for writing this wonderful and pondering poem. Chris.
  1. Date: 5/23/2010 9:57:00 AM

    Hey, Satin Doll, I bet john Heck will really like this one. He really likes free verse poetry and I wish you good luck with this sweet poem.LUv, andrea
  1. Date: 5/23/2010 7:46:00 AM

    Quite profound observations of young love, Satin Doll. If people do not "grow" together, the infatuation fades. Only with nourishment can love endure the test of time. Well done! John will like this one. Love, Carolyn