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My Meltdown

I don't know why you don't notice me
Everytime we talk, you don't notice my true intensions
I want you to be mine and only mine

One day, we walk from school and we talk about the little things,
Eventually, we are alone I decide to tell you everything I want
You just look at me; with disgust, hatred, and pity
With that you take off and leave me alone

I yelled and screamed at myself, telling myself I am truly disgusting
I look right beside me seeing a knife
Is this what you want, you want me to suffer pain, really?

I take it and put it in my hands..
My final words....
"Even in the end, I would die for you..."
And with that everything turned black...

Copyright © Ritsu Namine | Year Posted 2013


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The Other One

We say we are friends, but I want it to be more
It's like I tremble everytime I'm around you and my heart races
But then that's when she showed up...

She is the one you fell for...
She is the one that you like...
She is the one you find perfect...
She is everything to you...

You always talk about her and such
You never want to hear what I say, only her
It makes my heart ache to see you find someone else other than me
Tuh, maybe you would die for her? 
Or maybe not?

But just remember...
Who was the one that cared for you the most...

Copyright © Ritsu Namine | Year Posted 2013

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Your Choice

The hope you give me
The sorrow you bring me as well
Which one is worth it?
Heck, I can't even tell


You say you truly love me
Oh, you really do
But is that a way just to give me 'HOPE'

After everything
I will never stop loving
The 'DESPAIR' you bring me
and the pain as well

One cannot go without the other
HOPE and DESPAIR are all tied together
We cannot change that...

But...

If we try...
No wait...
Let's not try..

Keep me in 'DESPAIR'
I'll see you there soon...
"Keep up your 'HOPE', my love"

Copyright © Ritsu Namine | Year Posted 2014

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