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Internal Inhibition

Is it just that a trust to easily
Keep faith too openly
Feel accepted too fast
And so fail Evey time

They say friendship is trust
Well I thought.. let's try it
And you'd expect some glorious tale
Spolier alert it ends badly..
Here's how it goes

Lost a friend right away 
And a few more yet now
Whyy??? Oh well cause I trusted people
People I thought would understand and console
People I thought who reaally cared
But in the end they gave me away

Yes there was a time I doubted everyone
My mind was in a frenzy I thought too fast
I made mistakes...mistakes that shouldn't have been made
But now I do accept them 
My thoughts have changed past that and so have I

For once again I lost the trust in people I just gained
I kept on telling how bad of a person I was..
Wating for them to accept it and yess they did it today
Those messages aren't to be screnshoted..they are carved on the hearts forever....

I might have been wrong....thought to much... replied to fast...
But was I wrong to trust and tell that just to be thrashed away...
From a place I thought I could be myself?
I don't say I was right the whole freaking time but at least I asked
But didn't get an answer

What was I to do for I still seeked an answer
An answer to leave me in peace that yes they were my true friends
For that I turned out to others 
thinking they would help
But nahhh they just did the opposite 

I looked for what a friend a brother?
Well forget it I deserve none 
U know everyone has there bad times 
Maybe I had mine
But just stand once in my place and give it a thought
Cause I for all know u have done worse..

But in those blues I found you
Looking in your jet black eyes made me spiral down to your heart
If it wasn't for you I would be here
The faith now restored all because of you.

23 April 2022
Internal inhibition
Edward ibeh

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The Mirror of Life

The flowers were blooming everywhere.
The wind as if drenched by its fragrance,
Blew slowly through the alleys.
To keep the scent alive.

Then came those hot sunny days.
The sun all fiesty,
Shining bright from behind the trees.
The whole world at its mercy.

Months go by, the brightness now dimmed,
But still enough to make the world,
Shiver at his command.
The fire still lit behind those eyes.

But at last it's the dust we belong to
The place we come from the place we go back to.
It's time now to back up from the light 
Cause there are more like you wating to shine.

But that fragrance is undead,
As are the beautiful flowers of spring in our hearts.
Seldom staying in our remembrance.
Go ahead lad and shush the silence that birthed them all.

5 may 2022

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Tilted

Ooohhh the wind, oohh the dreadfully cold , stood through it in the middle of the stadium, a broken pole bearing the score board.

The springs out of the display lights, on his broken foot..he stood there, shivering in the night, a small shawl laid on him.. fluttering through the wind, just as forgotten as he was.

How he missed his golden days, the days where, as white as a chalk, he stood right up and tall, eager to be written on.

Reminiscing about those days he shed a tear, the crowd all gone. He stood there alone in the stadium now and the fog took over, maybe afterall it was time, time to say good bye...

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His Will So Wondrous

For mankind are sinners from birth
spiritually dead unable to choose
needing a saviour from iniquity
for only God can bring good news.
So God sent his begooten son
The crippled lad stood beneath the bell tower
Rang The bell with all his might
With each strike.
The ashes cleared up..
The rope was the way
The child, the saviour
the massiah, the redeemer.
Abide in His will so wondrous
spreading the Gospel of salvation
exalting the omnipotent Saviour.
They spent his spirit to dwell with us
To show us the path 
Thee who died a death so we lived a life 
Is between us, between you, between me.

12 July 2022
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 7'
Mark toney

Mark Toney
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 1
14 th June

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Breaking Dawn

Its dark, the woods

Jacob sits beside the campfire thinking of all his miseries. A rainbow of thoughts of which one draws attention. "Why". The cackling of fire can still be heard. The thought taunts him.

A brief moment of silence, the cackling fades, no howls, no moon, emptyness. He has let it go, the thoughts. At that moment Jacob stops caring, His selfishness dead.

Renesmee..the fire reflects off her perfect face , as radiant as the sun. Her cheeks rosier than the reddest of the roses she outruns them all human or not. 

Her heartbeats echo my name calling me closer. The future flashes in front of me. The glimpses i can't wait to see. Imprinting...this is what it is

It feels something like never before.. Knowing the world isnt about him, the story isnt about him. Jacob is not Jacob anymore, not just the creature of night,he is the author.

Mark Toney
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 2
15 th June

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Resilence

As Fred's words reverberated through the air, a sense of unease settled upon the group. "Is it ever?" he mused, his tone tinged with resignation. The weight of his words seemed to be amplified by the heavy silence that followed.

But amidst the quiet, a voice spoke up, offering a glimmer of hope in the face of uncertainty. "Be strong, be resilient, shine your light," it said, imbuing the air with a sense of determination. The words carried with them the power of the human spirit, a reminder that even in the darkest of times, we have the strength to persevere.

For in the face of adversity, it is the heart of a lion that beats within us, driving us forward with unwavering courage. And just as a butterfly emerges from its cocoon, transformed and reborn, so too can we shed our old selves and embrace the new.


Metamorphosis isn't covered sir replied the student

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Birth of Child

War cries -Wild yet Joyous
Battles-Bloody yet triumphant
Birth of a child

Bite size poem no 44

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Stroll In the Woods

The rustling of leaves the buzz from the hives,
the sound of lapping water is what makes the woods alive.
on one fine afternoon thought to take a stroll in the woods
Hoping the fresh air would clear the days worries.

Saw a mother squirrel gathering the chestnuts 
keeping a watchful eye on her babies 
and I must say I admired their guts
For they played near a snakes nest.

I sat there watching on the heather 
Gazing absentmindedly at their little play
And loo striked the snake 
Gobling one in a mouthful.

Running came their mother and took the others away,
The nuts long forgotten on the dreary ground.
evening fell but the mother didn't return near her child's prey,
for she knew she had a family to protect.

 That afternoon taught me a lot 
 Clearing my mind helping me to think straight
 Men are born and so do they die
 Bring grief and unhappiness
 But moving on and prioritising is the best way out.

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Twilight

Let the day always fade says Jacob as he watches the moonrise. The nightsky twinkling, simple yet astonishing. He looks at the moon, tensed, not  knowing what to say. He looks

A tiny shiver of what might come next. As the words disappear, it intensifies. He screams and cries, to the moon

But little does he know, the moon belongs to the night.

For he, under the vast violet sky, is but a wolf.

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Trust

Is it just that a trust to easily
Keep faith too openly
Feel accepted too fast
And so fail Evey time