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My Five Senses

When I write I use my every bit of skill 
these fingers they have loved, cajoled 
fed and bathed babies,... elders too 
they were made for typing words anew; 

When I write I use my eyes to see 
the things that need to be reviewed
the pulse of a wing upon a blue heron 
the shift of a leaf on a tree or a flower 

When I write I hear the world around me 
sometimes muffled by the noise and rush 
sometimes quiet as a homely mute  
sometimes I can hark, a pin drop....

When I write I can smell the coffee 
from my favorite writing nook 
by a distance I  can inhale the roast  
that shakes the beanie undernote

When I write I can taste the empathy 
of a broken dream on celophane sheet 
of a titan in his glory, onward victory!
or a dying victim after a sudden crash

When I write, I am the sharpened sword 
When I write, I give myself up to the word 
I can feel, hear, smell, see and devour 
When I write, I feel the creative power
inside,  
                     when I write....

July 24, 2018

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