Ageing means no turning back the clock
And the road ahead is an uncertain path
Upside is you can drive a chair that rock
Shriek streak freak rambling psychopath
Reedited: 2:27 p.m.
4/1/2021
Florida
USA
Categories:
reedited, age, humor,
Form: Rhyme
HELPLESS
Honored moral values to support and guide.
Earnest reverence showed way on prediction.
Lost being encompassed by malice, enmity and greed.
Perturbed in dismay, but had to proceed under consternation.
Locked in deep apathy to compromise or embrace.
Emotion in unearthliness sighed to seek solace.
Sinking in disappointment and despondence
Strong sense of hopelessness hankering for a solution.
11/03/18.
Reedited on 06/ 23/21
First Place
'' All Yours (Jun 23)" Contest by Brian Strand
Categories:
reedited, anger, anxiety, feelings, hurt,
Form: Acrostic
HYPNOTIC GLOW of SPRING BEAUTY
M pearly passion
blazes in crimson glow on
flames of flamboyant.
Emerald emotion weeps
on fallen pollen in ground.
02/13/17
Reedited on 03/05/21
Spring Time Beauty Tanka
Contest by. M.L. Kiser
Categories:
reedited, appreciation, inspiration, passion, spring,
Form: Tanka
BEAUTY IN BLUE
Blue Lagoon merging in green ocean,
Azure sky with horizon entwined.
Glow of your blue eyes met my vision,
Blue print of your glance pasted in mind.
I put blue sapphire on your finger,
You blushed crimson: My blue blood bubbling,
I told ‘Will you marry me, My Dear?’
Your peacock blue eyelashes twinkling.
Blue bell sparkled on your glossy hair
That eve, blue band of rainbow most bright.
Periwinkle stars twinkled in glare.
Blue Moon witnessed both of us at night.
01/24/17
Reedited on 07/09/21
First Place
'A Brian Strand July 10'
Contest by Brian Strand
Categories:
reedited, color,
Form: Quatrain
Then, was a lot less adversity
Then, you just can't compare
Then, was common courtesy
Then, people they did so care
Then, there were less prudes
Then, people got on together
Then, a different set of attitudes
Then, we'd never say never
Then, was more fashionable
Then, seemed more classic
Then, was more memorable
Then, I think was just fantastic
Then, time's were more sleek
Then, was just way more cool
Then, I would say was unique
Then, though now is oldskool!
inspired me by my other writes a new age, world in my eyes
conversations with other people family friends ext
also other soup members and of course current issues
some could probably relate to also WRITTEN 0CT 2012
FIRST HALF TALKING ABOUT NOW AND HOW THINGS WER
THEN REEDITED ABIT CHANGED VERSE TWO COMPLELY
Categories:
reedited, life, people, people,
Form: Rhyme