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Raftsman

From primal atavism
            Navigating the procela
            with strong courage and faith
              sailboat will sail

              Neptune Counterpart
              tame dark sea
              ancient pirogue raft

Sheepish Goat

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For several years, I've been a raftsman every summer
          Ferrying herds and noisy folks across this gray river
                 Who shout, argue and fight about this body of water

 
The goat-like shepherd bleats out loud, wise-cracking puns
Says: "You can never cross the same river more than once
          It changes every moment, every swirl, every flow
          May look the same but its waters come, its currents go
You float or swim in it, but then whatever you do
This river's not the one .. that you crossed awhile ago!"

 
The sheep-like goatherd retorts in a long, screaming leap
Says: " That's a shallow view, I've got something really deep
          If the river is the water that drenches your knees
          A dozen rivers can swish by you in just a sneeze
Even when you pause for just a short  minute or two
You're not the one crossing .. the rivers are crossing you!"

 
As long as their banter won't make my raft keel over
        And they pay their fare like any decent passenger
                 No goatherd, no shepherd will I push into the river!

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What Might Get My Goat

For several years, I've been a raftsman every summer,
     ferrying herds and noisy folks across this gray river
          who shout and argue about this body of water.


          The goat-like shepherd bleats out loud wisecracking puns;
          says "You can never cross same river more than once;
          it changes every moment, every swirl, every flow;
          may look the same, but its waters come, its currents go;
          you float or swim in it, but then whatever you do,
          this river's not the one that you crossed a while ago!"

          The sheep-like goatherd retorts in a long, screaming leap;
          snorts, "That's a shallow view, I've got something really deep;
          if the river is the water that drenches your knees,
          a dozen rivers can swish by you in just a sneeze;
          even when you pause for just a short minute or two,
          you're not the one crossing, the rivers are crossing you!"


          As long as their banter won't make my raft keel over
     and they pay their fare like any decent passenger,
no goatherd or shepherd gets thrown into the river!


What Gets My Goat

For several years I've been a raftsman every summer,
      ferrying herds and noisy folks across this gray river
            who shout and argue about this body of water.

The goat-like shepherd bleats out loud wisecracking puns
   that you can never cross the river more than once,
      it changes every moment, every swirl and flow,
         it may look the same, but its waters come and go,
            you float or swim in it, but whatever you do,
               this river's not the one you crossed a while ago !

The sheep-like goatherd retorts in a screaming leap,
   says that's a shallow view, he's got something deep,
      if river is the water that drenches your knees,
         a hundred rivers can swish by you in a sneeze
            even when you pause for just a minute or two,
               you're not the one crossing, rivers are crossing you !

As long as their banter won't make my raft keel over,
      and they pay their fare like any decent passenger,
            I shall throw neither goat nor sheep into the river.

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