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A poet must strive for perfection—his work is destined to reflect the world and his identity. With each line, he confronts procrastination head-on. With every verse, he engages in re...
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Categories:
probations, absence, abuse, allegory, anti
Form: Narrative
Probing Integrity
...Probation sounds too probing,
kinda dirty
and/or messy,
probably says we didn't work out,
Then reset
try again
with closer
and more sobering supervision.
We all live within win/win shad...
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Categories:
probations, culture, earth, health, integrity,
Form: Parallelismus Membrorum
De Gyul
...De gyul
The first time see the gyul
Ah want to meet her family
I going to get a diamond ring
I don’t care how much it cost me
gone to ask her to get marry
But she did not say no or yes
Wha...
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Categories:
probations, parody, house, me, brother,
Form: Light Verse