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The Pitfall

Like a remote yet lucid picture in a dream,
The  strange scene of some sequence set
Runs in patches, pictures and linked to fret;
And anxiety squezes itself through to scream,
At the unknown dreary source of the unease;
The oft cherished homely thoughts so dear,
Need no more space nor moments  to spare
When the journey past ,or still ahead to dare,
Carry with them hope and the purpose clear-
As to what is to be done and what is to come;
A little thing that ensues from neglect or pride
Leads but to crevices or breaks in a neat finish;
Well thought, honest prompts never diminish
The vigour and vita to float even in ebbing tide ;
The fear hid in the soul's corner may rupture:
For, there the devil in diplicity awaits to capture!

Premium Member Soldier PITFALL-

Cowboy Oh-boy
Combat Kit Kat
Rapid Salad
Baseball pitfall
Soldier Dozier

5/20/24
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2024

Pitfall

I did not know what I did not know
Though I thought I knew it all
So I went where the wise don’t go
And pride came before my fall

Headlong down into a pit
Bleeding, bruised, heartbroken
Now in a darkened stupor sit
My future fears unspoken

Far too feeble to escape
Despair has left me numb
I find myself in need of grace
Waiting for rescuers to come


Pitfall of Insanity

My self mutated behavior 
Resides over me
A disturbing dark form
Drifts there permanently 
The sadistic hovering mass
Forces torrential downpours 
Which rain decaying acidities 
Sweeping over me instantly 
As an infectious disease 
Running ramped through my blood
I have yet to catch my breath
And still it pushes forward
I have damned the innocent
Or is it with my self loathing
Grudge seeking, spiraling pitfall of insanity
I have damned myself 

M. Lyn Church 
February 15, 2013

Premium Member Pitfall

Mouth puts you
Judges you
You
Love
Lord

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