Pickaxed Poems | Examples


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it hurt so much that she prised out the molar in despair

with a corner post missing pain oozed from wounded flesh

one cavity exchanged for another but rawness lay bare

she tried painkillers and sedatives then settled for hash


anguish hampered her feelings and she tore at her heart

until emotional turmoil pulsated in oblivion and voids

took a few more puffs from the reefer to make a start

to clean up her act but failed and reached out for opioids


dazed in a haze it appeared to work well for a short while

she pickaxed her mind and attempted to extract the root 

of disorientation sorrow and evil but her mind remained vile

confused and drugged the remedy’s effects stayed rather moot


alcohol uppers and downers magic mushrooms and cocaine

followed her on the devastating road to full blown compulsion

whatever she tried she spread bedlam and became more insane

threw the drugs in the loo and looked back in fearful repulsion


21st September 2020

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