Long Drive in Poems

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Premium Member The Tinsel Town Tease

What I really wanted to do was  

Have a little fluffy buzz  

All the flashing lights  

Were ever so bright  

In the evening night  

The carpet ever so red  

Does it know how much I am in debt?  

Hopefully this roll will work  

There will be food on my fork  

Trying to make it here  

Wondering how many guys are watching with a six pack of beer  

But I will be a star  

Not at some local rural bar  

Instead on the wooden screen  

Where everyone will pay attention to my fearful scream  

You see I am in the first scene  

This is my modeling dream  

To get knocked off  

While making out in the barn loft  

Reading scripture  

In a moving picture  

Scheduled for a limited run  

At midnight everyone will have fun  

Only a few minutes my character will be done  

Venturing outside the big city  

Acting enthusiastic and witty  

Then tomorrow I will head to another gig  

Pitching household goods or the Christmas pig  

Getting away with my good looks  

While reading way too many books  

Wondering if I should study how to cook  

Then I can appear talking in the morning  

Career now is really soaring  

Offers start coming in  

Celebrity status accompanied with a shot of gin  

Reclining back in my director’s seat  

Reflecting about the time when I was innocent and sweet  

Those were precious memories indeed  

Since that was when they planted my bad seed
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Charlieku - Recalling 5 By 5

Recalling        Laughing          Reading               Learning       Teaching myself
the flicker of   into night with    all of the             to cook and    how to wear
         fireflies    my sisters   Nancy Drew books   loving to eat     makeup

Rainbows over   Pizza              Troll dolls           Ping pong in     Boyfriends and
    Iowan             Saturdays     Hoppity-Hop     study hall and    drive-in movie
  corn fields   Popcorn Sundays   and my bike      Swing Choir         kisses

Lying in grass  Grandma's house  The movie house  Sleepovers'     Dancing to
   seeing            at the end of    with its starred      chit chat        live music at
shapes in clouds    the lane            ceiling           and girlie games    twilight

Hot days            Lilac bushes      Gaily       Herman's Hermits    Writing
  cooling off         and the big    spinning on    Bread and      short stories -
at Weed Park Pool   ballfield    carnival rides    3-Dog Night    dreaming awake 

Snowy winters  The tangled woods  Endlessly  Clothes bought with      All the
   raspberry        behind our           swinging      babysitting     wonderful things
      summers       first house        up to the sky   money        of my youth

Oct. 17, 2018 for the Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest of charles messina
Words like choir, etc. checked by HowManySyllables.com
Form: Haiku

Premium Member Let S Hear It

Let's Hear It

Growing up a teen in the 60s
A Baby boomer baby I'm known
High school was like stepping into another world
Of fun sports to join, watch, and stir
Class spirit Homecoming football games
Proms with the big white mums glittering on chiffon dresses
Basketball, volleyball, track, and cheerleading
With pompoms in my hands, loud cheers, and chants
Summer swimming, surfing, and lying out on the beach
Getting that golden amber tan was always fun
Miniskirts, tight sweaters, scarfs, and boots
Sock hops parties, and vinyl records,
Bowling, and parking at the drive in theater
College turned things around
I looked at life different
Studying and working to fund my hobbies
My passion became my job a business that I dearly love


2/5/2016
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Rural State of Time

Inside the coffee shop 
At the counter a beat cop 
Being a routine buyer 
Late night special that soon will expire 
Keeping tabs 
On those driving cabs 
Is the dispatcher 
Finding a matcher 
Make the right run 
Passenger pick up done 
Sitting in a booth 
Paying bills keeping a home and roof 
In another corner 
Fiddling with a recorder
A reporter 
Writing a story 
Saying ‘not to worry’
Then there is a teen 
Releasing poetic anger using words that scream 
Garage rock n roller 
Scribbling lyrics on a school folder 
Explaining what he told her 
Goal right now collecting green 
Will do anything for the team 
As the waitress comes bye 
Visiting each guy 
Pouring a drink 
Leaving them alone to think 
In a place 
Where a dessert brings a smile pleasing one’s face 
Discuss issues and build a case 
Over a blue plate 
Actually tasting great 
After paying bill 
Enjoying the fill 
They all leave 
Working for a fee 
To a degree 
Sitting back down 
In the diner town 
Server watches another group 
Come in enjoying an all night loop 
A teacher 
Preacher 
And a creature 
Working concession at the drive in double feature 
Wearing a costume 
Entertaining under the moon 
All here 
Bringing some cheer 
Simply put there is nothing to fear 
In a rural state of mind 
Where everyone has the time
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Drink a Slice of Sea

Go to the sea if you feel slight
On a blue draped dreamy night
When the sliver disc of the sky 
Dances with the sea on the sly
Riding silent waves rising high
Reach the moon you would try
Cut slice of still sea on its side
Like the birthday cake liquefied
Drink to celebrate time you got 
Someone for you has brought.

The sea would enter you serene
With a piece of moon's silver sheen
That sparkles broken on the wave
A dear birthday gift you can have
And save in your heart’s recess
The waves would drive in pulses
Blue blood in cascading arteries 
And transmit harmonic melodies
To the heart that would beat in glee
With the rhythm of the dancing sea
You would invent an abode to reside	
Hear songs someone singing inside 
For you would be lifted above
The rolling waves silent in love.

Written : August 26, 2017
March 29, 2020
Contest : Strand Choice T, Any Form, Any Theme
Sponsor : Brian Strand
Form: Rhyme


Cherry Tree

Another sleepless night, I cruise and am lost.
A midnight drive, the perfect cost. 
Intoxicated by the most beautiful soul.
She invades my dreams, makes them whole.

She is the sunshine, to my cherry tree.
Nourishing love, passion fruit to be.
The river connecting the ocean, to the endless sea.
Her voice reminds me of angels, a romantic dream. 

Her eyes more precious than shooting stars,
A beauty that can see through souls.
The Goddess of love, Venus; a heart of gold.

Now I drive in the moonlight, while the world sleeps.
Thinking of ways to always keep;
Your love & your smile; for who needs sleep to dream?
When you exist to me.




N.P

Last Symphony

Packed my 92-year-old dad
Into the old Lansing-made black Cadillac
To see the Detroit Symphony play at Wharton
We’re dressed up at the red light of Waverly and Saginaw

This vital busy corridor
Once home to Schmidt’s Estes Furniture Leonard’s Appliances
A golf course with sledding hill
Sully’s Drive-In

Now this crossroad is a Plasma Center a closed Rite Aid and a fortressed Walgreens
Along with the many amateur drug dealers
Meth heads wandering with their hook hands out on corners
Holding cardboard signs Anything Will Help
Hair wild like bamboo shoots
Golf course long ago abandoned the hill fenced off
An automated carwash over Hole 13

Next to us rumbles a pickup truck
Two huge flags stuck up in the wind from the rack in back
One
A faded dirty American flag
The other
Blue and black FxxK Biden

Two fat hillbillies laugh it up in the cab
Blow their horn
Children from nearby cars learn how to read
Shame

This is the capital city of Michigan

Wharton is jammed with suits and gowns
White-tapped graduation caps
The theater a carpet canyon of chatter

Next to the baton-poking Maestro from Italy
Stands a blond violin soloist with a sassy haircut
Red dress and red lips
A fire roaring to the center of those seated companions
Stringing and preening around her

She dips and weaves her wild bow under her chin
For 35 minutes of solo flame-throwing

At the end as we stand and bravo
I look over to my dad
He is weeping

“Are you ok Dad?”

“It’s just so magnificent what humans can do
And this will probably be my last symphony
And I was able to spend it with you.”

My mouth curls

I wonder whether this might be the last symphony
For any of us.

Premium Member Southern Sunshine Hospitality

There was a panther roar 
On an icy Canadian floor 
Off in the distance 
Images filled with persistence 
Somewhere south marlins swim and dolphins dance 
Aquarium stage is where they get the chance 
While heat experience Orlando’s indoors 
Loving the magic galore 
Once Miami was not a sporting town 
Sunshine greeted northerners having a wintry frown 
Hotels on the beach 
Causeway drive in reach 
Cruise ships leaving port 
Caribbean mystery destination wearing touristy shorts 
Architectural artistry is the first rest 
A town called Key West 
Waiting to impress 
America’s southernmost point 
Ghostly Cuban cigars aroma in some joints 
Even if a passenger goes 
Only to the author’s self-destruction Sloppy Joes 
It is time well spent on shore 
Reminder last century who was running the country’s store 
Off to the saintly islands 
Scenic views romantic and admiring
Vacationers started tiring 
Wondering any of these lines were hiring 
Historical tours 
And good weather more 
Create a nice paradise 
Purchasing the all-inclusive price 
Finally comes the Mexican Mayan ruins 
Smiling intently “who on the bus we are going fooling” 
By asking “what are you doing?” 
Homeward bound 
Back to the tropical town 
Where the colors are flashy
Soothing attitudes that are nasty 
Stating their case 
In the Florida place 
Where oranges were once in a bowl 
Pleasant escape from bitterness that was cold
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Gourmet Concessions

Smiling recollections,
summer evening reflections, now
almost gone for new generations
while my venues of childhood musings
and adolescent anticipations
...near extinction.
I must concede my willingness to share
what they will never recall
     - the exhilaration 
when Dad would pronounce,
"We're going to the drive-in tonight".
A creature double feature,
"The Blob" and "I Was a Teenage Werewolf",
both Feep worthy presentations,
fantasmically speaking.

The impatience for dusk was matched
with the rush of a 10 minute intermission
and, while spotlights played on the
darkened screen, cardboard pizza,
Buttercup popcorn, hockey puck hamburgers,
soggy steamed dogs, and french fries, 
were greedily consumed for more
than the price of admission.
Hood ice cream cups with flat wood spoons
for dessert, then back with only
one minute 'til SHOWTIME to the
mosquito safe car where "Pic" coils
repelled the infestation while smoldering
on the glove box door - mesothelioma be damned!

Then, if we didn't escape with an
early exit dash, were caught
in the dust and chaos of the only
late night traffic jam in town.

And...years later, those teenage
trysts, without permission - I'll never tell
            what movie?
But, always remember "Gourmet Confessions"!
Form: Narrative

Progress

Progress
by Michael R. Burch

There is no sense of urgency
at the local Burger King.

Birds and squirrels squabble outside
for the last scraps of autumn:
remnants of buns,
goopy pulps of dill pickles,
mucousy lettuce,
sesame seeds.

Inside, the workers all move
with the same très-glamorous lethargy,
conserving their energy, one assumes,
for more pressing endeavors: concerts and proms,
pep rallies, keg parties,
reruns of Jenny McCarthy on MTV.

The manager, as usual, is on the phone,
talking to her boyfriend.
She gently smiles,
brushing back wisps of insouciant hair,
ready for the cover of Glamour or Vogue.

Through her filmy white blouse
an indiscreet strap
suspends a lace cup
through which somehow the nipple still shows.
Progress, we guess, ...

and wait patiently in line,
hoping the Pokémons hold out.

NOTE: This poem is almost entirely fiction. There was a Pokemon craze when my son Jeremy was a little boy, and I did see birds and squirrels foraging in parking lots from time to time (and sometimes fed them myself from my car’s window), but everything else is fiction. On the rare occasions that I went to a Burger King, I would go through the drive-in, so I wouldn’t have known who the manager was, or how much time he/she spent on the phone. I think the poem probably started with the image of birds and squirrels squabbling for scraps of food in a parking lot as I waited in a line of slow-moving cars, then evolved as I imagined the hassle of going inside to “speed things up.” Keywords/Tags: America, Americana, American, culture, society, vanity, youth, progress, fast food, video games, Pokemon, MTV, music videos, glamour, models, supermodels, fashion, transparency, see-through, bra, breast, nipples

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