Drink a Slice of Sea

Go to the sea if you feel slight
On a blue draped dreamy night
When the sliver disc of the sky 
Dances with the sea on the sly
Riding silent waves rising high
Reach the moon you would try
Cut slice of still sea on its side
Like the birthday cake liquefied
Drink to celebrate time you got 
Someone for you has brought.

The sea would enter you serene
With a piece of moon's silver sheen
That sparkles broken on the wave
A dear birthday gift you can have
And save in your heart’s recess
The waves would drive in pulses
Blue blood in cascading arteries 
And transmit harmonic melodies
To the heart that would beat in glee
With the rhythm of the dancing sea
You would invent an abode to reside	
Hear songs someone singing inside 
For you would be lifted above
The rolling waves silent in love.

Written : August 26, 2017
March 29, 2020
Contest : Strand Choice T, Any Form, Any Theme
Sponsor : Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/31/2017 9:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/31/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I
Date: 8/30/2017 11:11:00 PM
My favorite time and place and object! Love this, Subimal - congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/31/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Greg so much for appreciating.
Date: 8/30/2017 2:07:00 PM
beautifully expressed...great rhythm and rhyme too! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:58:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, for your appreciation.
Date: 8/30/2017 1:08:00 PM
Congrats Subimal to to win on this wonderful poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/31/2017 12:54:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha for your appreciation.
Date: 8/30/2017 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful write, Subimal, congratulations on your win :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/31/2017 12:53:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 8/28/2017 11:05:00 AM
"Waves in love", i definitely love this write!:)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2017 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, Mansi for appreciating.
Date: 8/26/2017 9:59:00 AM
This is written very well and beautiful. A favorite for me to read again. I enjoyed it today :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/27/2017 12:08:00 AM
Th. ank you, Heidi for appreciating my effort.
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