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Scare Crew

Scare Crew

little whispers 
Gives me chills
Whispers to me
Trapping frozen spirits
inside ocean waves they chill before awakening

The moon  in its deviant smile
Sees your every move
Knows whos been creepin around before his brilliant glow
Now morning told the Sun unveils All what darkness hides
Sunshine sparkles turns to water vapor and falls as crystal rain
Where do you go when you hide with my glow
Ahead of me or behind me 
teenager revenger or terror force
Killing favorites enduring the pancake of remorse
No one can leave and you thought has no mean
The mean of lose in these tough days obtuse
Free n easy who deserves
Saturn seas ready for lifes reserves
under a violet Saturated sky
A little bit of bad  all told it could be worse
Just don't Take away the chance that passes a decade ago

No one escapes 
This scare crew
What pray what drive these thinks of   
pharaoh of Shephard of king
Those last words 
Are they gifts of forgives

Freedom answered winter summarizes hope
Lost are the big meals,back when we really dined
Prices absorbed the stupidity from the past
Abit of takeaway day by day
Pile into the back seat of the mind Haunting screams in the middle of night
Oh no oh no no no
It can't be ...
Waiting for a life that never appears Buses and trains snatch up  your  rhymes 
You created this monster without lullabyes
There you see the face
The girl 
With the familiar name
Hey look I remember the face
When life lost its childhood
When life lost its laugh
And thrill was rare gone was teenager life
Who would be waiting at the next stop
A voice cries out
Saying drive on mother f'er


Reflection

Feels like I've faded in to the back ground
And still even now confedence one lacks
Jaded, the fact inner peace is still unfound
But no paint brush will ever fill them cracks

Now looking at my reflection in the mirror
Is one that just seems so old and so grey
And on closer inspection, it's even dimmer
My story told from what was then yesterday                                                                                         

Now a blank canvas where was once colour
Not saying that I was some kind of portrait
But anxious, comparing myself to every other
As what I once saw I really liked but now hate

Those textures that were once rich in youth
Now withered with time that’s passed me by
Mixtures of every emotion now it's like struth
Looking back at me is that the same guy?
 




This was already on here but just felt neede tweeking a little bit 
trying to put in bettter form or context add a little humour 
less trival than before but still anever ending battle ith ones self
reflection originaly called dismorphia 
somthing delt with sinse my teens though through my twenties went out my way to ahnge myself a lot
gets harder as you get older though i think


NOTE LIKE OTHERS TWEEKED A LITTLE JUST FELT BEFORE TO MUCH CONTENT  


NOTE UPDATED ABIT DON KNOW IF SHPOULD CHANGE STYLE OF WRITING?????? 

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inspierby by all the cool soup poets sinse last januray  PD LARUA REBBECA ECT  XXXXXX
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WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Form: Rhyme

Then

Then, was a lot less adversity
 Then, you just can't compare
 Then, was common courtesy 
 Then, people they did so care

 Then, there were less prudes
 Then, people got on together 
 Then, a different set of attitudes                                         
 Then, we'd never say never

Then, was more fashionable
Then, seemed more classic                                                                                            
Then, was more memorable                                                                            
Then, I think was just fantastic

Then, time's were more sleek                                                                              
Then, was just way more cool
Then, I would say was unique                                                                               
Then, though now is oldskool!



inspired me by my other writes a new age, world in my eyes 
conversations with other people family friends ext 
also other soup members and of course current issues
some could probably relate to also  WRITTEN 0CT 2012

FIRST HALF TALKING ABOUT NOW AND HOW THINGS WER
THEN REEDITED ABIT CHANGED VERSE TWO COMPLELY
Form: Rhyme

Elements of Life

Water, we know that it is invigorating
As long though as it’s clean, not rancid                                              
But of course something that’s hydrating
For some a dream we take for granted

Fire, can be a source of fuel, for heating                             
Like if our appliances we can not use 
And It can also of course produce lighting
Getting out the candles, if you blow a fuse                                                    

Earth, used to grow our fruit and vegetables
Also plants for other things such as cotton
Again you know another of nature’s miracles
I think by chance we seem to have forgotten

Air, we need an atmosphere to create oxygen
So we can breathe, or how would we survive
But of course air that is free from the pollution
I believe the same for everything that is alive

Life, element of elements a question of humanity
If no existence, it's like the asteroids in space
When thinking of the wild life every bird and bee
I'd say be grateful us humanoids are in this place



  SPARE OF MOMENT IDEA DID NOT PUT MUCH EFFORT INTO
INSPIERED BY OTHER WRITERS ON POETRY SOUP ---------- 
ANNE LOUISE ,CATIE ,CAROL,  POET DESTOYER AND OTHERS
 jUST EXSPERIMENTAL AT TIME- THE ELEMENTS OF LIFE
WRITTEN 2012,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 
updated just edited abit still same
this universal for everyone out there
    JUST TRYING TO PUT IN BETTER CONTEXT THAN BEFORE
CHANGEING A FEW WORDS ABOUT A BIT
Form: Rhyme

Extraordinarily Ordinary

something has changed,
But nothing has changed,
I feel different,
But I feel the same.
Things seem different,
But they don't,
I sense something extraordinary, 
But I look around and everything is ordinary.

Is it me who's changed?
I don't know I look the same,
Something tells me I don't, may e if I look again,
Really look I might see change,
If I look deep down in side,
Oh There it is, me trying to hide,
I grab on and tug, and tug at me abit more.
But I won't budge, I won't move, I'm staying put, afraid to come out, afraid of what's outside.
It's bad enough battling the war going on in here, but it's the u predictable out there that I fear.
It's the not knowing from one day to the next, what will I be dealt with what's coming I can only guess.

I hear this and I hear that,
But i don't know what to believe? What's true?
What will the future bring for my kids, when I havnt even got a clue?
I do know the one thing I know is true,
That life's to delicate to be just ordinary it's up to me to work out what is real and somehow, I have to make it extraordinary


Reflection

Feels like I've faded in to the back ground
I got so used of being behind the senses
Jaded, the fact inner peace is still unfound
Still now I'm trying to live my lost dreams

Now looking at my reflection in the mirror
Is one that just seems so old and so grey
And on closer inspection, it's even dimmer
My story told from what was then yesterday                                                                     

Now a blank canvas where was once colour
We all have a flaw, not saying I was a portrait
But anxious, comparing myself to every other
As what I once saw I really liked but now hate

Trying to keep up the visage I’m out of remedy’s
And still though the confidence what one lacks
Stuck with in this collage, a sea of memories
But no brush will ever paint over them cracks

Many creams and posions used over the years
So I'm told beauty’s in the eye of the beholder
Though so many emotions worries and fears
Carrying this huge weight up on my shoulder


Those textures that were once rich in youth
Now withered with time that’s passed me by
Mixtures of every emotion now it's like struth
Looking back at me is that the same guy?
 




This was already on here but just felt neede tweeking a little bit 
trying to put in bettter form or context add a little humour 
less trival than before but still anever ending battle ith ones self
reflection originaly called dismorphia 
somthing delt with sinse my teens though through my twenties went out my way to ahnge myself a lot
gets harder as you get older though i think


NOTE UPDATED ABIT DON KNOW IF SHPOULD CHANGE STYLE OF WRITING?????? 

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inspierby by all the cool soup poets sinse last januray  PD LARUA REBBECA ECT  XXXXXX
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WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

CoVentry

The other day I was walking past ironmonger row
    When I noticed boarded up, every shop window
    I dare say they will be sold or knocked down too
    This town just seems a contrast of old with new

   Why destroy every land mark like the old fire station
  Why not build a theme park or more commendation
   Where’s the green belt and where are all those trees                                                                 
    I just felt I should mention all that’s left is memories

  I remember Owen and Owens before it became alders 
  And now yeah they have changed the place yet again
  Dose anyone remember that little shop called ralffers
  Well yeah I know, everyone says that was all back then

 They can change the city but not the views of the people
 The only place that retains it's history, is the old cathedral
And what dose Coventry mean to me?, like most I just frown
Well nothing really, like everyone says it's just a ghost town

           Inspierd by conversation with someone in libray
      Short and sweet just something else to write about a time
pROBABLY SOUNDS ABIT CYINICAL  BUT BEING HONEST
COVENTRY DID HAS SOME GOOD POINTS BUT NOW ITS FADED AWAY   
this was apost to be entered in to a a small compotision back in sept 2009 
but missed dead line unsure of subject matter at time
Form: Rhyme

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