*Image of Beach Snowman by Pixabay.
Hawaiian Winter - WS
Snow trace e'er so oft
Soloist compacts barely
Do salt waves surge teasingly?
Surf and sand hulas
Sun melts away mini-me
So snowman bid Aloha?
Revised: 2023 January 10
Original: 2023 January 08
*1st Place*
Winter Sedoka
~~Charles Messina: Judged 2023 January 25
*HMS.
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