Elaborations Poems | Examples


Premium MemberPRIMIVITISTA wallis rousseau

PRIMITIVISTA 
direct
  simple
  innocencd
in
naive
  elaborations
fancifuly
pictured
  predestriamical
unsophistications
in
connotations
of
artistic
  purity
freed
from
the
  formal
Categories: elaborations, art,
Form: Didactic

Premium MemberPHENOMISTA riley appel

PHENOMIMISTA riley appel
hue
  tone
in saturations
dazzling
  & intriquing
focus
  falling
concentrations
   colliding
creating
  coherent
sensations
    continuous
experential
  elaborations
intense
   & dense
spectacular
     simultaneous
contrasting
   proportions
in
perceived
   peculiarities
Categories: elaborations, art,
Form: Didactic


A Promise, To Keep

Blurred sights, clarity remains
Rebelliousness nonexistent, sometimes a ray
Associations a downfall, leading astray
Numbness soothing, until panic soars
Attendance to depart, ensuring departure. 

Unsteady legs, balanced steps
A poured escape, drowning in regret
Unnoticed presence, disturbed by familiarity
Speech absorbed, uninterpreted
Purpose defeated, knowing the unknown. 

Emotions fluctuate, care constant
Emptiness filled, with concentrated sips
Excessive consciousness, a poor act
Elaborations fluent, betrayed by a stench
Erroneous responses, beckoning distance. 
 
Mental lapses, memories stored
Glass drained, a purchase to be made
Uncontrolled motions, perceived to be intentional
'Disappointment' echoing, volumes relentless
A pond of thoughts left, to a lonesome ponder. 

Loss envelopes, relations sustained
Shards scatter, threatening flesh 
Invisible tears, sodden spirits
A fated meeting, a choice afforded
An inebriated promise; a sober agreement.
Categories: elaborations, drink, drug, feelings, forgiveness,
Form: I do not know?
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