Detectably Poems | Examples


The Way I'M Not Clean For Soup 8 of 11

Back when you had authority
fact is you behaved horribly
I was your only priority
actions stressed unsightly 
lashing out as you'd fight me
infatuated obsessively
forcing oppressively 
harp so all think less of me
smackdown unimpressively
as you fail when addressing me
acting predictably 
thinking sickly
everyday blatantly 
bait and detectably 
you were really detesting me
couldn't get the best of me
but that's just how you be, 
I'm glad that isn't me. 

I react there's your smile to see
your nasty vile mind set free
just out to cause misery,
I'm glad that isn't me.

impacting repeatedly 
no slack til defeating me
an all out beating spree,
I'm glad that isn't me.

I saw your true personality
all out insanity
the narcissistic reality,
ecstatic that isn't me.

Yes you come across as an evil person,
that personality of yours couldn't worsen,
but I'll stop putting you down with curse,
it's evident that your brain has burst.

Though you come across horribly,
I'll conclude my thoughts logically, 
It's clear you behave like a moron
because you're brain cells are all gone.
Categories: detectably, humorous, hurt, me, people,
Form: Rhyme
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