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Premium Member WHEN SUMMER IS GONE

Grace still prevails...
toward planned mountain trekking
propelling faith to surmount slippery paths
conquering threats of slime pit-falls
that challenge pinnacle-ascent.

Blessings of rain showers cascade...
as heaven pours down crystal treasures
to answer rice terraces’ quest
and pleas of flower gardens for blossoms
as well as trees in orchards to bear fruits 
toward harvests worthy of sharing along festive delight.

Thanksgiving pervades...
midst commencement exercises
while breeding goal-fulfillment
as triumph is anticipated
with vibrant and radiant hope
since what matters most
when Summer is gone
the Creator Lord reigns*
above every season!

*Revelation 19:6 And I heard as it were the voice of a great multitude, and as the voice of many waters, and as the voice of mighty thunderings, saying, Alleluia: for the Lord God omnipotent reigneth.

July 19, 2024
1st place, "When summer is gone" Free Verse Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Jcb Brul; judged on 7/24/2024.

Premium Member Graduation Delight

Commencement exercises delight
never bore pre-schoolers in their flight
toward stage, full of bliss
for rewards* they can't miss
and promised graduation festive might.

A blessed graduation to class 2022.
*Ruth 2:12 The LORD recompense thy work, and a full reward be given thee of the LORD...

June 3, 2022
4th place, 	"A funny Limerick - Any Theme" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 6/19/2022.

Star Spangled Memory

Mine eyes have seen the glory of the coming of the Lord wrapped in the laughter 
and the sounds of a five year old.

Truth is marching as I witness commencement exercises across the university 
law campus.

Bombs bursting in air has a truer sound and a detailed message as I reread the 
letters from my son who serves his country overseas.

This is where the real pledge of allegiance is silently read.


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