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My Vision

I'm on a long journey from 
Sun up until sun down
My mission is to try and 
Keep my vision around
I suffer from retinal detachment 
In both of my eyes
Was almost blind forerver
But to my surprise
Through years and months 
Of lazer surgery
My retinas are no longer detaching 
But it's still a  long journey for me
I look around at this world 
People are so cold and grimy
When all I really want
Out of life is to see
Through the pain I still strain 
But manage to find a way
To keep strong and have vision 
Each and every day
The surgery helped me see but 
My vision is very poor
So I will continue on my journey 
Until I can't see anymore




FOR MATT CALIRI JOURNEY CONTEST

The Journey

Once I thought of a journey
the journey, where life is going to meet another life
the life, somewhat strange somewhat insipid
somewhere its unknown
that unknown is my destination.

I started my journey once and for'er
I knew am alone, lonely with my soul
and once i looked back from where i left
I found my own footprints
that showed the path
the path to where am heading
its the destination
I realized its the seventh heaven.

I went on n on..
at time i saw someone is beside me
I came to know, no one
but my own shadow is with me.
There then came when i saw
the evening disappears with 
darkness's appearance..
Far there to my eyes strains
I saw that lonely moon sitting idle-
I told myself.'still you have the stars as your friends'.

I walked down to my destination
the darkness followed me,
without looking back this time
i saw li'l far my destination
the destination to where am heading alone.
I realized the time
its quite late
walked faster n faster as I could
And when i came closer
I saw the destination is crowded with lots
of friendly souls.

I turned back and realized
the destination to where i was heading
was not love but sacrifice.
Now again i started my journey
the journey then was to my destination
the destination from where i had started..
in this journey my shadow was no more
it was a journey i made alone
and returned alone.

"your Path"

Shaken up, spun around, and knocked down
Left alone, hardened to stone, fighting for what you own
In a way you’ve lost, though your journey has just begun

Success is fleeting while you spend your time retreating
Significance of your life summed in a second
On your way you got lost, began your journey backward

The path winds with whipping winds
Vines creep and crawl to trip and tangle
But you are no longer lost, travel through the hardships


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