Best Reacting Poems


Reacting To a Hateful Bank Rumor

Steady rustling of stacked-high newspapers,
On the vendors stand US skyscrapers;
A long face further parting with brightness:
The type that treated not things with lightness
It’s a man heading for a child’s mistake;
From last medical check-up much at stake!

Started it had with a rumored broadcast,
Which listening through made Chapman downcast.
Now, he’s at Lukman’s vendor stand for more
Of a hitting news that few minds could store:
“All banks shan’t be working for two weeks,
Their once-cheerful customers goddamned freaks!”

Yes, some bank manager did cook alive,
For home they’d sought to cashless point drive.

Chapman looked like he would die in a week, 
Who had seemed throughout January sleek!

Premium Member Reacting To Aphrodite

Stunned by her beauty, our tongues would not work
We could not stop staring, she was a flaming goddess
A princess, a queen, the quintessential woman
We admired her from afar, afraid to get closer.

Her beauty might dazzle our eyes out.
Who is she? I asked, when I regained my speech.
Aphrodite, goddess of love, beauty and passion.
Validation that I was not overreacting.

Reacting To Fear

When I don’t feel safe, I draw back and flinch,
shutter in fear and I can’t seem to calm down. 
Little or big things can set me off in a pinch
and instantly I feel like I am going to drown. 
It’s the way my heart races so quickly in fear
that makes me want to run and stay clear…

                               OF-

Those darn commercials about the animals abused, 
a loving dog shelter taking a charity donation.
I can never understand why some are amused
inflicting pain on one of God’s sweet creations. 
For there are no words to express my distress,
as my eyes close with woe, heart racing in stress. 

                       OR HOW ABOUT-

The fact I love horror movies yet hate being scared.
Why do I torture myself when I watch those movies???
I jump off the couch and scream so despaired
from watching the scariest movie Paranormal Activity!
Blood, guts, violence and guns make me weak in the knees,
my blood pressure rising and body two hundred degrees!

                    THEN THERES WHEN-

My hubby thinks it’s cute to tickle my sensitive feet.
It’s like, he knows it makes my itchy skin crawl.
I have to be nice because he is being so sweet,
but there’s been times when I start to bawl.
He thinks it’s my time of the month when I shriek-
Nah, it’s ‘cause I hate it…so I flinch and I squeak!

                               SO-

These are three things that make me jump back in fear-
Geez…give me a break! My wincing is clear and severe!



June 14, 2019
What Makes You Flinch Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver


No Reacting

Not reacting you  can stop the pain,
Not reacting you can change the fate
Not reacting, when the world needs your voice
Not reacting, when there is no choice...
Being passive, when  the world needs your action
Living only  for your own satisfaction
Your own personal cell is the whole world for you
Take a look  outside someone may need you...
You can stop the wave  of death by positive noise..
You can stop the killing by making a choice 
You can save the animals and be the rebellion force 
Standing against the evil empire of suffering  and gore.
M.J. 2020

Premium Member Reacting To Headline News

You’re in a great mood
Whistling dancing twirling.
Loving your life

Suddenly the TV gets louder
Two hundred fires
A plane crash that killed a hundred 
Thirty-one car pile up

You stop whistling
Your dancing feet tangle up
You fall, now in a completely different place

Wait! Your angel says.
That is them. Not us!
You begin arguing with her

Suddenly you need a nap.
You are feeling sluggish
You cancel your dinner plans

Is it guilt?
Is it empathy?
Is it fear?

It certainly is not positivity
It is not optimism
It is not realizing this might be your last day to whistle and dance

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