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Premium Member HIKU and U a poetic observation

hiku

&

you

&

me

are


ENTIRELY FREE 

TO BE


POETIC


TRISTIC-HALLY




HAIKU is a centuries old Japanese traditional phonetical & cultural poetic form 
whereas
 HIKU is a relatively recently reference to the 75year old established  haiku in English. Hiku being  an imagist tristich like its elder cousin,without a title,and with a similar economy of words ,inherently enigmatic & with a caesura or an ellipsis and surprise ending. A similar sense of pause the aesthetic insight flowing from perception gained from 'one breath length ' composition that flowed from the Japanesese 17 onji sound inherent in the Japaneses haiku. Without any syllabic( 5-7-5 ) line restrictions, the hiku is the 'free verse' version of the   haiku in English. similar but different ,a present tense poetic in another language - hiku is the written or recited equivalent to arts 'gestural spontaneous happening' .
  
A verse freed from strict syllabic constraint within its triplicity of format& is inherently enigmatic & often with a caesura and surprise ending( VERSUM )to give a 'turning' to the line.

The hiku maybe a horizontal  single* line,(often  broken line at the caesura),a vertical line(usually a painting(haiga) ,a couplet** or a tristich* with shape-like variations.

Premium Member JUST SAYING my art AN EMPERICAL VIEW

gestural
 abstraction
 immediate
spontaneous
  drips blobs
 from the tube

non-formal
  un-formulated
art informel
  sans cérémonie

an
absence
of
 a premeditated
   structure
 conception
       or approach
dribbled
splashed
   smeared

an emphasis
upon
  the physical
process
  itself

Premium Member Wols With Eyes Closed

layered 
              washes
of the profound&zany

resonate
without
conscious control

the simple
         delicate & elegant
woven   tinted
raw
tropes

embellishments
etched
    scratched

lyrical 
   gestural counterpoints
of
abstraction
     interfolding 
        then
collapsing

seitgists 
  images
sans analysis
sans explanation


Premium Member MAKIING A GESTURE


Dutch artist Willem de Kooning
with gestural* art had a fling
Action expressed with nonchalance
a genre requiring taking a chance

*www.tate.org.uk/art/art-terms/g/gestural

Premium Member Clerihew Jorn

Danish Asgar Jorn
painted boldly in Free formi
A Founder of CoBrA school
with gestural art so cool

Premium Member HIKU and ME -creativity the KEY

HAIKU is a centuries old Japanese traditional phonetical & cultural poetic form 
whereas
 HIKU is a relatively recent reference to the 75year old established  haiku in English. Hiku being  an imagist tristich like its elder cousin,without a title,and with a similar economy of words ,inherently enigmatic & with a caesura or an ellipsis and surprise ending. A similar sense of pause ,the aesthetic insight flowing from perception gained from 'one breath length ' composition that flowed from the Japanesese 17 onji sound inherent in the Japaneses haiku. Without 'invented'  syllabic( 5-7-5 ) line restrictions of the 'haiku in english 'is the 'free verse' version of the  '5:7:5  haiku in English'. similar but different ,a present tense poetic ,the - hiku is the written or recited equivalent to arts 'gestural spontaneous happening' .

Creativity the key in a verse freed from strict syllabic constraint within its triplicity of format(tristich)& yet inherently enigmatic & often with a caesura and surprise ending( VERSUM )to give a 'turning' to the line.

The flexible hiku maybe a horizontal  single* line,(often  broken line at the caesura),a vertical line(usually a painting(haiga) ,a couplet** or a tristich* with shape-like variations.




hiku tristich examples 

he dusted the album-
a memory of love
trickled down his cheek

winter unfolds-
galanthus nivalis
in  the woodland 

5:7:5 haiku (haiku in English) example
on the wind,a bell-
muffled from across the square
raindrops fill the air

5:7:5 haiku( haiku in English)with title example
An Abstract Haiku

blue and gold circles
revolve,dissolve and endure
picture,perfect pure


Premium Member to HIKU or HAIKU that is the question

HAIKU  is a centuries old Japanese traditional phonetical & cultural poetic form whereas HIKU is a relatively recently established English language version thereof 'birthed' from last half of the 20th century.
Hiku is an imagist tristich like its elder cousin,without a title,and with a similar economy of words ,inherently enigmatic & with a caesura or an ellipsis and surprise ending.
A similar sense of pause the aesthetic insight flowing from perception gained   from  'one breath length ' composition that flowed from the  Japanesese 17 onji sound inherent in the haiku.
Without  any syllabic( 5-7-5 ) line restrictions, the hiku is the 'free verse' version of the haiku,similar but different ,a present tense poetic in another language - hiku is the written or recited equivalent to arts 'gestural spontaneous happening'
.

Premium Member Clerihew Hartung

Adman Hans Hartung
gestural ab art the song he sung
Spontaneous ,neat& free
a bit like Chinese calligraphy

Playful and Surreal Love

We copulated
          in front of the TV ...
          Every scream of yours,
          a goal of mine ... and the fans
          crazed applauded ...
          We copulated,
          in front of a canary ...
          Every trine of yours,
          every moan of mine,
          mesmerized, and challenged
          further was cracking the canary ...
          We had sex,
          in front of a shooting platoon ...
         in our wince,
         extra shivering ...
         We'll be done soon
         not to be
         hit by the bullets ... and look, neither
         we felt guilty ...
         We had sex,
         in front of a cat ...
         Every moan of yours,
         every howl of my ... the cat
         meow all bristly ...
         We didn't have sex
        in front of Gioconda ...
        But let's do it ...
        for her to lose her pose,
        to cut her protruding
        gestural ...

Premium Member Combined Outlines

COMBINED OUTLINES
gestural flourishes
mingling
with
the
naive
images

solitary
 simplicity 
of
imagery
reflowering
subtlety
enlarged
rough-hewn
&given
grandeur

a diagram
of isolation
in everyday
images

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

Premium Member GESTURAL ART a personal defintion

GESTURAL ART IN ACTION

spontaneous
  instinctive
     instaneous
informal
freely
  formed


random
momentary
   immediate
 impulsive
impetuousity
in
inherent
  perception

Premium Member Configurations

CONFIGURATIONS

 excitment
in gestural
 figurative
emotive
 motifs

highlighted
 moments
becoming
reasons
&
 influences
 of
existential
purposets

incorporating
 themes
 taking stock
events
in
 polar
 opposites
 to ruminate
over
&
acknowledge
imagination
 uncover
see
&remember

so
open
& free
a
collaborative
harmony
as a
 starting point

punctuate
&
entrench
 a
recurring
optical
effect
of
an
unknown

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

Premium Member Distractions

DISTRACTIONS
figurative
  motifs
emotive
 gestural
come
 naturally
everywhere

remember
a
 moment
alongside
influential
imagery

feelings
of the
 existential
 of purpose
of themes
 traversing
meaning
& motivations
to ruuminate
upon
uncover
&
remember

the
power
 of
unmistakable
 imagination
a
space
full
of
significant
 matter
punctuated
by
optical
 effect
layered
& entrenched
 over
recurring motifs


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

dangerous eyes poetrix



         


         piercing gaze
         inviting mouth
      gestural noir scene

Premium Member ACTION MAN wilhem

Dutch American Wilhem de Kooning
made his gestural actions sing
With intiuitive painterly flux
experiential spontaneity ever the crux

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