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Best Critiqued Poems


Critiqued
Me...flawed private facade
Unmasked public despair
Looked upon and onto buildings
Filling open space
Galaxy crossing,nation wide
Devils in disguise spat in the 
face
*spits*
Of the one who makes you
Remorseful and unremarked
Deeply undermined
Gradually tormented
But yet successful
So I ask
"Who are you to critique and 
lessen the quality of my work?"
I,but a profound...

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Categories: critiqued, life
Form: Free verse

Book: Reflection on the Important Things