Best Coherent Poems


Premium Member Coherent Thoughts

Truth could not be eclipsed,
And you said it was a joke.

There was a mystical feeling,
Behind your saying that you 
didn't care.

I could feel obscure pain 
beneath, 
And you said it was alright .

A desire was shrouded,
Once you said I should leave 
you alone.

An Imperceivable feeling was 
sensed,
And you said you didn't know.

I could feel you in disguise,
There was a silence of deep sea 
water.


Written May 16th, 2013

Featured poem of the wk as on Sept 9th'13

When it comes to you

When it comes to you,
I know I am doing something right.
I have always known it from the start.
It's the way you just smile sometimes
On the sunny days that seem like nothing special
And you hold up my umbrella for us
And we walk hand in hand
And all I can see is you
Guess I have never mentioned it before

When it comes to you
I know I am doing something right
The universe seem to have aligned for me
It's how you can make everything better
My fatigue
My mind
My pain
Even my words
It surprises me
How I am coherent to you
Seems like you hear my heart and mind.

When it comes to you, 
I know I am doing something right
It's the way you can come see me even on rainy days
And walk with me even for a thousand miles
How I can take you everywhere
Even for things you have no business relating

When it comes to you
I know I am doing something right
It's how you can cook for me
Even so repeatedly
Like it's nothing
How you can take care of me
Like it's the most natural thing in the universe 
How you just bought a bandage because I was bleeding
It didn't matter I had my own

When it comes to you
I know I am doing something right
It's how I can tell your sincerity without even a word
I don't question you, I just know
And I don't even have to hear you say love me
Though I did like to hear it a 1000 times
I know it in my hearts of hearts
And I can listen to your breath
With your body so warm like a snuggly blanket
And how I can look into your eyes sometimes
Well I believe I have arrived at my destination.

Coherent Whole

You've read it correctly,
 that's what the directions said directly
but
it's not some innate random homogeneous gift 
 that encourages and displays these internal poetic rifts,

we are somehow blessed, 
 betrayed, besieged, bestowed, beleaguered and bemoaned
 by words, phrases, unmatched rhymed teasers enthroned
upon some grandiose display of mismatched garble
 a picture, an image, a brain's ensemble, quite remarkable,

the integral, seamless agreed-upon selection
 of who or what could be prisoner to our dissection, 
there within the confines of heart, body, and mind
 lay hidden pseudo images soft, hard, vile, and kind, 

therein those coherent enigmatic systemic wholes
 buried, shaped, unseen, rhythmic whispers of our souls,
the center of our individual, molded, subservient whole.
© DM Babbit  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member COHERENT IMPRESSIONS-:-

COHERENT IMPRESSIONS-:-
preferred
 echoed
elemental

eloquent
feelings
with AMBIGUITY 
gratifying 
  vanished
urbanisation

preserving
faience 
in ORNAMENTAL MONOTONY
arresting
 imaginations 
anonymous

acquaintance
unity

Premium Member COHERENT CLOSE UPS-:-

F.COHERENT CLOSE-UPS-:-
disrupt
 unified
tones

vaguely
precise

to CREATE TRANSITIONED
deciphered
 dissolved
miraged

sourced
illusions 

once LOST IN MIST
glimmering
 tactile
motifs

silhouetted 
celestials

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